Why does that spell even exist? (BE story)

[Chaos Echo]

Originally Posted by DevonCory

I really like the last few chapters you've posted. They are quite good. That last one was pretty hot... and I really don't mind.

The only thing though, is that it was a little hard to read IMHO. I had some difficulties trying to figure out what was what, and when was what.

I had it so there were larger gaps between paragraphs that separated the time frames, but...

What could I do to make it clearer?