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I need to turn an SW RP into a SW story! But -

it starts almost in the middle of hotness. Or the beginning of hotness! It's a scorching RP I did with Nina! MMM

Here's the start of it! ((Slightly edited already. Oh and she gave me approval to write it up! Also English is not her first language. She's German.))

My YM Status was "on a shrink break!"

nina: heya
Ozara: Hiya Nina! ** glomp **
nina: whats a shrink break?
nina: *hugs*
Ozara: shrinking on your break from chores or work I guess! haha
Ozara: I actually have to get back to some housework
nina: oh.. you could also understand it as a break from shrinking..
nina: too bad
Ozara: ikr
nina: ikr??
Ozara: i know, right?
Ozara: in other words - yeah
nina: i better dont give you some shrink potion then
nina: *shows you the vial*
Ozara: mmm ** bites lip **
Ozara: rain check...
Ozara: mmm damn
nina: the label says "extra potent... can cause disappearence"
Ozara: mmmm - oh gawd - I wish I could down that whole bottle right now
nina: *gets closer and sticks the vial into your cleavage, right between your boobs*
nina: teehee
nina: ^^
Ozara: ohh it's chilly - what a temptation that will be
nina: *squeezes your breasts*
Ozara: MMMM Heyyy!
nina: oh sorry
nina: *biting my lower lip
nina: as like tempting as the bottle *pointing at your chest*
Ozara: mmm oh you ** leans to give your a nice wet kiss **
...

I've done some creative writing in high school, and I've done pretty well with Cait, who is an excellent writer. But, um, any suggestions on a beginning leading up this? I'm not sure what to do with the beginning. :/ Settings. Description of where we are. How she got the potion. Etc. I've shared it with two or three peeps, but I think this will be very hott as a story.

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