Midna BE Story

Ninja In The Night · 06-15-2008

I've been dealing with moving in real life, but I glance at the forums now and again for about 5 minutes. You've done a great deal with the story "TheShoeLace" and it's got great potential. Your writing style's only flaw is some slight grammar here and there, but otherwise, nothing that doesn't come with repeated writing and experience. The critique your looking for doesn't exist, because honestly, there's nothing to improve on.

06-15-2008	#11
Ninja In The Night Knight Of The Black Sword Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: In the forgotten era of man... Posts: 418	Re: Midna BE Story I've been dealing with moving in real life, but I glance at the forums now and again for about 5 minutes. You've done a great deal with the story "TheShoeLace" and it's got great potential. Your writing style's only flaw is some slight grammar here and there, but otherwise, nothing that doesn't come with repeated writing and experience. The critique your looking for doesn't exist, because honestly, there's nothing to improve on. __________________ Click here to feed me a Treat! Get your own at Pokeplushies!