Looking for Feedback on an Inanimate TF Story

Ordos · 08-06-2009

'Ello.

I'm Ordos Tsceri, long-time lurker, first time contributor. The other week I finally posted a transformation story on TF Media, largely because I was having trouble thinking of where it should go.

TF Media is a nice site (http://tf-media.net/) but feedback on the stories is rather quiet. The story is here; http://tf-media.net/2009/07/auction-part-i

It contains voluntary inanimate transformation and is fairly graphic/sexual, even though no intercourse has actually happened (yet?). I want to continue with this idea, but I've been having trouble thinking of what to do. Any feedback about style or suggestions about possible future transformations would be greatly appreciated.

-Ordos Tsceri

08-06-2009	#1
Ordos Process Fan Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 60	Looking for Feedback on an Inanimate TF Story 'Ello. I'm Ordos Tsceri, long-time lurker, first time contributor. The other week I finally posted a transformation story on TF Media, largely because I was having trouble thinking of where it should go. TF Media is a nice site (http://tf-media.net/) but feedback on the stories is rather quiet. The story is here; http://tf-media.net/2009/07/auction-part-i It contains voluntary inanimate transformation and is fairly graphic/sexual, even though no intercourse has actually happened (yet?). I want to continue with this idea, but I've been having trouble thinking of what to do. Any feedback about style or suggestions about possible future transformations would be greatly appreciated. -Ordos Tsceri