Suggestions for next part in comic commission.

Jwargod · 04-20-2010

http://olympic-dames.deviantart.com/...tion-160818423
http://olympic-dames.deviantart.com/...on-2-160926823

Those are links to the comic currently.

For the next part, was gonna have him/her play with appearances, but not too much. The first thing she tries to do is turn back to being male and not pregnant, but nothing happens. Was originally thinking of her either changing races, but thinking its too early in the story and the guy isn't in character for designing his dream girl just yet.

What I thought would happen next as possible routes is that she makes herself pretty butch looking (trying closer to being a guy), or she makes herself completely flat bust wise and immediately changes back to her original bust size due to it being too weird/wrong. If the latter, I want to add something else she tries to change (no idea what though). At the end regardless, she ends up with a very large grumble from her stomach (she's got an alien symbiote in her) telling/reminding her to drop anymore changing/planning and catch something to eat.

Any suggestions/alternatives would be appreciated, also asking the artist herself for advice.

04-20-2010	#1
Jwargod Frequent Poster Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 127	Suggestions for next part in comic commission. http://olympic-dames.deviantart.com/...tion-160818423 http://olympic-dames.deviantart.com/...on-2-160926823 Those are links to the comic currently. For the next part, was gonna have him/her play with appearances, but not too much. The first thing she tries to do is turn back to being male and not pregnant, but nothing happens. Was originally thinking of her either changing races, but thinking its too early in the story and the guy isn't in character for designing his dream girl just yet. What I thought would happen next as possible routes is that she makes herself pretty butch looking (trying closer to being a guy), or she makes herself completely flat bust wise and immediately changes back to her original bust size due to it being too weird/wrong. If the latter, I want to add something else she tries to change (no idea what though). At the end regardless, she ends up with a very large grumble from her stomach (she's got an alien symbiote in her) telling/reminding her to drop anymore changing/planning and catch something to eat. Any suggestions/alternatives would be appreciated, also asking the artist herself for advice.