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The Succubus' Vows - Part 3 (Complete)
7/31/2010 Version 1.1 update
I have gone back and done some typo and grammar corrections. I won't claim its perfect but the latter third needed another proof reading pass and I'm happier about it now. Also clarified a few things. Some new content based on suggestions has been added in chapters 14 & 15. Also per request the full unabridged text of The Succubus Bride containing all three parts has been added as a PDF. Enjoy. --------------- Well...I said March...I apologize BUT...here it is. The extra time it took to write was a function of me going wild in a good way. There is not one, or two, or even three TF scenes, but FOUR. I eagerly await to see what people think now that the story arc has reached its conclusion. To my patient fans...THANK YOU. I GIVE YOU THE SUCCUBUS' VOWS. The Succubus' Vows picks up immediately after the events of the second story and concludes the The Succubus' Bride Trilogy. As before, for those willing to invest a little time a detailed character driven piece of TG fiction awaits. For those new to the series I strongly recommend reading Part 1 and 2 first. As before italics are reserved for emphasis or song lyrics, parentheses denote sounds. EDIT: Added links to parts 1 and 2. EDIT: Decided that some of the key references may be a touch obscure. Examples as follows for those not familiar with where they come from. The Jaws reference: The M-920 Reference: I welcome any feedback or comments either here or at reif4337@hotmail.com. ----- If there is enough interest I may package all three stories into a full length feature and commission an artist to make some art for it. If you are an artist that might be interested in this I would would like to hear from you. Last edited by Reif; 07-31-2010 at 08:15 PM. Reason: Updated Version |
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