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Process Fan
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 70
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That's beautiful. As long as the quality of writing stays this high, slowness of growth is no issue. I love the 'ditzy martial artist' character you've got here, and even without the BE she'd be able to carry her own story. Plus the fake-out in page 4 had me roffling. ;>
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