My first Giatess/growth story!!!!!

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ok. So this is like, my first GTS story, so go easy on me, lol. I'm not interested in any spelling and/or grammar errors that may be there really. I'd just like to know what you think of my story telling, and tell me wear you think I need improving.

Now, on to the subject of my story. It's a Charmed fan fic. So, for those who haven't seen the show, here's some background info.

The Charmed Ones are three witches: Piper, Phoebe, and Paige Halliwell. These sisters have a powerful sisterly bond, called the Power of Three. This bond strengthes thier Charmed powers, and thier sisterhood. together they fight the demons and other forces of evil the Underworld throws at them.

Here's some character bacgrounds:

Piper: The Eldest of the three sisters. She has the power to freeze people in time, and blow things up, all with a flick of her hands. While she's out in Public, she own's a club called P3 (Which is a nod to the Power of Three). She has two children, Wyatt and Chris, who are infants. Her husband is Leo.

Phoebe: Easily the weakest of the Halliwells. She once had the power to levitate objects, but that power was stripped from her wen she abused it. She now only has the power of premonition, that is, she can see the future when she touches certain objects. This power is more random than the other sisters'. in public she writes for a newspaper called the Bay Mirror. Her article is called Ask Phoebe, and it helps people with love problems. She has been married once, to a half demon named Cole. But he's long since been vanquished after he betrayed them.

Paige: The younest of the three Haliwells. She was born part witch, part white lighter. She has the power to "Orb" Or disapeear and reappear in a new place. She can call out any object and they to will dissappear and reappear. But she can direct the direction of where the object goes when she "Orbs" them. In public, she's never been married (yet), and tries constantly to find mister right. She once had a job as a social worker, but now she spends most of her time either at a temp job or at magic school.

Leo: Husband to Piper. He's the Halliwell's gaurdian angel, better known on that show as a white lighter. He guided them through rough times and protected them from thier toughest foes untill they where ready to face them. Recently, he was promoted to an elder, wich is the commanding ranks of the white lighters. Now he can no longer be with them as much as he liked, but he still helps out when ever he can. He has the power to heal wounds, and "Orb" at will.

Demons: The main Villains of the show. Thier powers depend on the type of demon. But most of them have the power to "Shimmer" (Which is thier version of "Orbing"), and form fireballs to shoot and destroy thier victims with. In public, they attempt to blend in with society so they don't expose themselves tothe public, until they are ready to strike at thier victims.

www.thecharmedones.com is a good place for more info on the characters and the show. Any advice is welcome. So, here's my first story!