Candide's Commission Contest: Free 5-page Comic

Soccermom · 02-12-2013

Page 1: A husband/wife(30's) are relaxing in a sauna naked, chatting happily.
Page 2-4: A green mist fills the air, and the man is TGed and then shrunk over the course of the three panels into a 2ft tall appropriately proportioned woman, and the woman is TGed and then ARed into a 12-18 year old boy. Both are utterly shocked as this occurs.
Page 5: They run to each other, and the former wife sweeps the tiny woman into his arms. The scene leaves the implication that they're still continuing their changes, and getting younger/smaller after the comic ends.

(Word Count 97)
((Age left with a wide range, because you said both no underage/post-pubescent. I interpreted this as the original transformee doesn't start as a child, but included the 18 there if I was mistaken. I'd prefer to see the younger version however, as it adds to the gravity of the situation.))

02-12-2013	#3
Soccermom Going against the flow Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 1,965	Re: Candide's Commission Contest: Free 5-page Comic Page 1: A husband/wife(30's) are relaxing in a sauna naked, chatting happily. Page 2-4: A green mist fills the air, and the man is TGed and then shrunk over the course of the three panels into a 2ft tall appropriately proportioned woman, and the woman is TGed and then ARed into a 12-18 year old boy. Both are utterly shocked as this occurs. Page 5: They run to each other, and the former wife sweeps the tiny woman into his arms. The scene leaves the implication that they're still continuing their changes, and getting younger/smaller after the comic ends. (Word Count 97) ((Age left with a wide range, because you said both no underage/post-pubescent. I interpreted this as the original transformee doesn't start as a child, but included the 18 there if I was mistaken. I'd prefer to see the younger version however, as it adds to the gravity of the situation.)) Last edited by Soccermom; 02-12-2013 at 08:45 PM.