Yard Work (Part Three complete 8/1/13)

[Dreamtales]

Wow, thanks for all the comments! I'm especially glad to hear the detailed criticisms because it reinforces that readers want to see a level of "believability" in the story. I agree that little things like pacing, consistent body size, how different characters react to the chemicals, etc. are important, so I really tried to get that right.

Of course there is a certain amount of literary license here. Amy might have taken longer to grow up because she was younger in the first place, or maybe Nicole sprayed herself with a stronger dose of Weed Shrinker?

Thanks also for all of great ideas for this comic - right now the script is pretty much completed for the next few parts. Assuming that sales go well, I might try doing other variations on the theme in the future. I'm definitely taking notes, so if there are particular scenarios you want to see please let me know!