So...how'd I do?

[Obsidian]

Next up is Sasha's Relapse Part 2. I'm not quite as fond of this one, as I feel like I didn't do as well a job as my 2nd attempt (Sasha 1). I got off to a bad start and made the mistake of altering my line art layer instead of my duplicate layer, and I feel like that muddied the entire pic a little.

The carpet effect still bugs me too.

But, practice makes perfect I suppose. What do you think? Is this one on par with my last two attempts? Better? Worse?

*Adding the line art and the colored versions.