Image - Be gentle, its my first

So i've taken up sketching recently (to see just how recently, see attached image) and i figure that you guys have seen all kinds of images that run from ranzab's near perfection to... Well.. lets not mention them.

So, i decided to sketch a little something and put it up to public scrutiny, and since i see problems but very few fixes. I figure there are a few artists who know a thing or two about putting pencil to paper, so i'll welcome any critiques (positive criticizm and fixes please )

Also, very quick run through on the wall in photoshop to add a bit of definition and get rid of smudges in the background.

So, without any further blabbering, i present a pic from a favorite category of mine.