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SoylentOrange · 11-18-2005

Very nicely done, Skiff. The only critiques I have at this point are the black bar in page six that's very visually "heavy" and doesn't seem to serve a purpose, and the fact that Dr. Ross goes from jacket to no jacket without any kind of in-between action or dialogue to let the reader know. It just kind of vanishes off her between panels.

Other than that, fantastic work. Great sequences, and I can't wait to see what comes next. You've got some real talent and skill behind your work and it just keeps getting better and better.

11-18-2005	#7
SoylentOrange Process Disciple Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 4,922	Very nicely done, Skiff. The only critiques I have at this point are the black bar in page six that's very visually "heavy" and doesn't seem to serve a purpose, and the fact that Dr. Ross goes from jacket to no jacket without any kind of in-between action or dialogue to let the reader know. It just kind of vanishes off her between panels. Other than that, fantastic work. Great sequences, and I can't wait to see what comes next. You've got some real talent and skill behind your work and it just keeps getting better and better.