My breast expansion webcomic and so much more

[Yermom]

Originally Posted by ryohji

I focuse on the comic, leaving the grammatical warfare. I don't want to be see as a rude person, but the drawing really needs practice. It is not very clear, even confused per moment. The foreshortenings are not good but it still a very delicate thing to master, even for pros, so no need to worry. In fact it is rather a question of practicing and taking time (And it is a guy who draw almost a page of comic per day who said that, shame on me). But I see a good potential on these pages. Don't feel discourage by what a breast elargement obsessed artist asshole wrote.

Focus; seen; "confused per moment" is better as "confusing at moments"; (comma); insert "is" ; (comma) ; drew; of "a" comic; omit the "a" before "good potential"; discouraged; enlargement. Just for starters...

I am soo bored today.