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[Kelberon]

Hmm.

Well, if Mattie's Ego is about being nurturing, maybe that should be the reason it happens in this particular case-for example, perhaps Otome has endured a rough day, so when Mattie sees her, she's very upset. This triggers Mattie's Ego, or causes her to drink some milk and trigger it, with the idea of trying to calm Otome down.

Of course, if that's too serious, you could end it on a silly note, like Otome bouncing back to happiness before Mattie does anything, leaving Mattie in her Ego form for the next few minutes/hours for nothing.

I know you've probably had ideas like this already, but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate.

[Matsu-sensei]

WARNING, LONG POST IS LONG.

Originally Posted by Kelberon

Hmm.

Well, if Mattie's Ego is about being nurturing, maybe that should be the reason it happens in this particular case-for example, perhaps Otome has endured a rough day, so when Mattie sees her, she's very upset. This triggers Mattie's Ego, or causes her to drink some milk and trigger it, with the idea of trying to calm Otome down.

Of course, if that's too serious, you could end it on a silly note, like Otome bouncing back to happiness before Mattie does anything, leaving Mattie in her Ego form for the next few minutes/hours for nothing.

I know you've probably had ideas like this already, but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate.

I have to say that I really like this idea. Great first post, btw. :B I think I'll use this if I get the chance. :3

"but I figured I'd try something that wasn't just "Oh! Breasts got bigger!" I always like to have more of a story, as long as it's not overly elaborate."

;w; I agree.

Originally Posted by Drybones

What do ya think of this?

Mattie starts drinking some milk and she drops something, or something falls out of her pocket, whatever just before she swallows the milk. And a gentleman is nearby and they both reach down at to pick it up. The guys head just happens to be under her chest when she swallows causing her breast to shoot out and slam his head into the floor.

I like this one as well. Maybe I'll compose some short 4komas bundled in one deviation, each 4koma being one of the ideas I like. :P

Originally Posted by Punchmechanic

Hmmm, most of those ideas, subway car, everything seems to be simple and standard issue hentai.

How about this... What if Mattie and Otome went to some bowling league tournament as fill-ins (How this happened, I do not know.) But end up where they both aren't doing so well until Mattie sits down all flustered with her low score with a glass of milk (Again, this could happen many different ways.) She ends up in ego form and discovers because of the huge amount of displaced weight, that she's able to bowl like a champion of some sort. Otome notices that the other team is getting distracted by the sudden set of upsized breasts and follows suit, discovering she becomes a decent bowler as well.

Later, they both get into it, competing who can bowl better between the two and end out punching some guy because he said one and not the other then immediately corrects himself once he gets hit in the face.

Maybe this could be a good plot? Also, there is chess and other assorted games.

Interesting, but a little too random for me. I guess if I have to have an involved situation, I'd rather tie it into a plot.

Originally Posted by zaroff

Now we are back on track!

I like the second idea that Otome gets happy and leaves Mattie in Meushi Mattie form. That seems more Matsu-sensei's style. What if after the punchline of Otome not needing her, Meushi Mattie justs falls over.

Just to hit the other side of the spectrum, what if Mattie changes into Meushi Mattie to beat out some girl who won't stop flaunting her body, though this maynot be ideal with Meushi Mattie's personality.

Or. Otome and Mattie come across a seasaw in the park. Otome wants to play on it. Mattie agrees. They sit on the seasaw and they don't go up and down (not heavy enough). Otome unwraps and shoots Mattie up. Mattie retaliates by becoming Meushi Mattie and sends Otome flying.

I like the second one better. Isn't Meushi Mattie the biggest of the two?

"That seems more Matsu-sensei's style."
You're right about that.

"though this maynot be ideal with Meushi Mattie's personality."
Also right. :O

Last idea is ok, but I don't really see it in their characters to randomly play in a children's playground. ^^;

Originally Posted by Blind_Seraphim

Now I understand the difference. In the earlier posts, all of the ideas were created with the thought that the entire comic would build up to the BE, and everything else was just a service to it. However, now it seems that the better idea is to have the BE worked into a situation, and have the joke be about how the BE affects the situation, not just about the BE itself. (Of course, we still don't have any confirmation of whether or not that is indeed what the artist intends...)

So, with that in mind... perhaps the joke would be about a lack of BE. Like a situation where Mattie would want to activate her Ego, but, comically, there would be no milk around. Or, instead, she can't find any milk, so she goes as far as to steal a cow to get milk.

Like, say they were at a beauty/bikini contest. Otome wears a normal bikini which shows her normal figure, and gets her a lot of points. Mattie decides to activate her ego to one-up Otome, but is unable to find any milk. Finally, after a elaborate search, she steals a cow (I mean, you could have her just go and buy some, but I think stealing a cow is funnier), but by the time she gets back, the contest is over.

Or, as an alternate ending, she arrives carrying the cow, but eventually collapses under the weight. Otome goes to help her, and since helping someone triggers her Ego, she shrinks down, and the judges vote her down. In the end, neither of them win.

There a few more possibilities with that one, and a lot of places where it could probably be improved much more, but I feel this is a lot better than some of my earlier ideas....

Kinda like the bowling and playground ideas, I think it'd be too awkward to jump into a situation like that. But the stealing-a-cow idea gave me a chuckle, and if I'm bored, I might doodle Mattie hauling a cow on her back.

Originally Posted by Matsu-sensei

Kinda like the bowling and playground ideas, I think it'd be too awkward to jump into a situation like that. But the stealing-a-cow idea gave me a chuckle, and if I'm bored, I might doodle Mattie hauling a cow on her back.

XD Well, I'll take making you chuckle. For now.

I'm also rather fond of the cow-stealing, too. I think a single doodle would work just fine, although I like the idea of playing out a situation where she is desperate for milk. Its hard to think of why one would need to use BE in everyday situations, which is why the ideas of them being different places kinda works. But I suppose you could alter it to something like Mattie being on a date with a guy who isn't really into her, but she discovers he likes bustier women. So, she tries to drink some milk, but finds that there is none. And so, the search/cow-retrieval part begins, and then you could end it with once she returns, the guy is completely head-over-heels for Otome, whose gauze had come loose.

Or something like that. I'm trying to think of more realistic situations to put them in. Unless the joke of Mattie wanting to induce BE upon herself isn't all that interesting to you, in which case.... well, my idea completely falls apart. ^^;;

I may as well delurkify in this wonderful thread here.

I don't know if you're all set, Matsu, but I figured I'd throw my two cents in. Personally, I love Mattie, I think she's an awesome little character, and she's cute as hell to boot. Well, enough ass kissing from me, here's my thought.

Mattie is at a coffee shop enjoying a cup, but the server got her order wrong and accidently put some dairy creamer in it. This doesn't trigger her Ego immediately, as the coffee has diluted it, but she figures that she might as well get home before things get out of hand. Misadventures ensue.

Honestly, compared to some of the other things I've read, that's nothing special really, but there it is for your consideration. Looking forward to seeing what you do turn out.

[Matsu-sensei]

Originally Posted by Ryoc

I may as well delurkify in this wonderful thread here.

I don't know if you're all set, Matsu, but I figured I'd throw my two cents in. Personally, I love Mattie, I think she's an awesome little character, and she's cute as hell to boot. Well, enough ass kissing from me, here's my thought.

Mattie is at a coffee shop enjoying a cup, but the server got her order wrong and accidently put some dairy creamer in it. This doesn't trigger her Ego immediately, as the coffee has diluted it, but she figures that she might as well get home before things get out of hand. Misadventures ensue.

Honestly, compared to some of the other things I've read, that's nothing special really, but there it is for your consideration. Looking forward to seeing what you do turn out.

Ah, thank you very much. :3

This isn't your fault at all, because you had no way of knowing, but one of my friends already drew a comic about Mattie that focused on that EXACT idea. XD;;

[Reido Cero]

Ah, geez. Well, it was worth a shot. If I come up with any more ideas, I'll let ya know.

Oh, right, this is Ryoc, just decided to go with another name.

[Matsu-sensei]

Originally Posted by Reido Cero

Ah, geez. Well, it was worth a shot. If I come up with any more ideas, I'll let ya know.

Oh, right, this is Ryoc, just decided to go with another name.

o_o Why'd you make another account?

Originally Posted by Kelberon

Well, I'm glad you like my idea. I should also note that while this is the first time I've posted on this particular forum, I've been a lurker for a long time.

But I did have a question-what length were you thinking of for these comics? I think it might be easier for some people to come up with ideas if they have a guideline for how long you're willing to go with it. And I apologize if you gave such a guideline earlier and I missed it, occasionally I skim posts.

Fairly short ones, maybe just 4komas (four panels). Not any involved plots or manga pages.

[Kelberon]

Well, I'm glad you like my idea. I should also note that while this is the first time I've posted on this particular forum, I've been a lurker for a long time.

But I did have a question-what length were you thinking of for these comics? I think it might be easier for some people to come up with ideas if they have a guideline for how long you're willing to go with it. And I apologize if you gave such a guideline earlier and I missed it, occasionally I skim posts.