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Sir Psycho Sexy
Join Date: Aug 2007
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Re: Midna BE Story
Mayhaps an interdimensional portal opens up at the end of this, allowing you to do the other three ideas?
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Join Date: Sep 2006
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Re: Midna BE Story
keep goin dood, I like your story alot!
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Join Date: Feb 2008
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Re: Midna BE Story
One Problem Gone, Another to Go sounds nice
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I'm afraid that I have already continued according to the choice '' Not Nearly Over '', but I may very well make this one as well, if so many people like it, okay?
Here's the next part of the story. Tell me if you like it! '' Link made haste towards the figure he saw on the ground. As he approached the figure, he could see that it was Midna, on her knees with her hands on the ground. From afar, he could see that breasts had no become smaller. In fact, they had become slightly bigger again, he guessed. Eventually, he stood in front of her. Midna looked up, with a rather dumbfounded look on her face. Link worried himself a bit about her. They looked at each other this way until Midna broke the silence. ?? Link... it?s all been for nothing...??, she said, making a depressed impression. Link put his hand on her shoulder and smiled at her: his comforting smile never failed. Midna was thankful, and she regained hope once again. Though she nor Link had the foggiest idea how to stop this curse. They decided to consult someone how?d helped them before, the old magician at the market. Link asked Midna to turn him into a wolf, and so with Midna on his back he ran off to the Hyrule Castle Town. Midna, on Link?s back, looked around. Hyrule Field was beautiful. Concentrating on other things could make her worries less. She wondered if Link felt anything of the change of weight. He ran as fast as ever, making haste on Midna?s behalf. Link, in fact, did feel that Midna was heavier. It cost him more effort than he liked to keep running at such a high speed. He was glad to see the town came closer and closer. Eventually, he was in front on the gate. Midna turned him back to human, and together they went in. It wasn?t a busy day today. There were only a few people out and about, and Link lost a good part of his hope to find the same mysterious man again. But he was mistaken. In front of the fountain in the square, sat a lonely old figure, begging everyone that passed by for some Rupees. Link walked straight at him, and the old man quickly saw Link as well. ?? Kind sir! Kind sir! Please, a few Rupees for a hungering man.??, he cried. Link searched his pockets, and found a red Rupee. He gave it to the man. The man seemed to be very happy. ?? You ARE kind. Kindness deserves a reward. Go home, Link and take your friend, Midna with you. In Ordon, you will find a solution to your problem.?? He stood up and disappeared in one of the alleyways, leaving Link rather surprized. Midna had not shown herself yet, but because no one was in the centre any more she now rose from Link?s shadow. ?? I guess we should try everything to stop... this.??, she said, weighing her breasts on her hands again. Link turned around and hasted out of the town. He called for his horse Epona and mounted her quickly. Midna jumped behind Link, and together they made haste for the Ordona Province. The sun was almost under when they reached the Faron Woods. They saw a man beside a bowl of soup, but they had no time for a chat. They ran on, until they came past the Ordon Spring. Link caught a glimpse of many fairies flying about. And then finally, Link?s house. He was glad to see it again. ?? Do you think... we need to look in your house? It?s worth a try, but have you got any powerful magical tools there???, Midna asked. Link shook his head, but he climbed up the ladder in front of his house, and entered it. It was a bit dark, so he grabbed his lantern and lit it. A warm light filled the room. An opened treasure chest stood in the center of the room. Memories came back to Link, about a wooden sword which he had gotten quite a while ago. He put his hand on the bottom of the chest. He felt something, and this surprized him. He picked whatever it was out of the chest. It was a piece of wood. Probably something that broke off. Link threw it away without giving it another thought, but Midna caught it. ?? Link... this has something carved on it..??, Midna said. ?? This is Hylian... it means ?Ordon Spring?, I think.??, she said. ?? It?s highly illogical that a message like this would be here. It?s almost as though someone is playing a game with us... but who is it???, she asked Link. Link shrugged his shoulders. Link walked out the door together with Midna, and walked back to the Ordon Spring. It was already dark, but the many fairies shone brightly, making it easy to see there. ??Yes, this is very nice, but... there is nothing here.??, said Midna, somewhat disappointed. Link?s face looked mournful, and together they stared for quite some time at the fairies flying about. What they did not see, was a dark figure sneaking into the Ordon Spring from behind them. ?? Eventually, these breasts will become a particularly huge problem.??, Midna thought. '' |
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Join Date: Jan 2008
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Your writing in this part is rather well-done. I, Huzzus, hopes that you are going to either bring Zants back or possibly a OC villain in the LoZ World.
Also, If Midna has grown from Grim's picture, exactly how big are they now ^^; I, Huzzus, am kinda losing track of the size so it might be a good idea to compare it to something.
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I understand that you are losing track of that- it just goes like '' they are a bit bigger again ''. I cannot describe it very well- let me think... They should be 25-50 percent bigger now. Not lower than 25 nor higher than 50- and I mean the moment the latest piece ended. ![]() |
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Join Date: Mar 2008
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Re: Midna BE Story
As per reading your above statement Shoelace,
I to like the Twili Midna option as well (Hey, I'm a fan of the form =P) But in effort of making your life easy, just continue on with this line and whenever you finish make a one-shot. Just an idea. But this is good writing. keep it up please. |
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'Kay then. Here's some more:
'' Link stared at the fairies, feeling a bit sad for Midna. Midna also stared at the fairies, not necessarily sad, but troubled. They heard a noise, and both Midna and Link quickly turned around. They saw that the gate had been closed, and they saw a dark figure run off. Midna noticed he was wearing a cloak. ‘‘Link, do you think that was our friend from the marketplace?’’, Midna asked. Link shrugged his shoulders. ‘‘ Link, how will we get out of here?’’, asked Midna. Link smiled at her. He walked towards a hole and started crawling through it. ‘‘ Link! My front nor backside would fit through there’’, she said. Link didn’t seem to hear her since he crawled on. She sighed, and sat on her knees. She tried to crawl in the hole backwards, but her buttocks could not possibly fit through there. ‘‘ Ugh... I’m supposed to be the Twilight Princess, not a Twilight Hourglass.’’, she said, putting her hands on her buttocks which were indeed considerably bigger than before. She crawled out of the hole again. Then she saw the gate was being opened by Link. She sighed with relief, and she quickly went towards him. ‘‘ Uh... Link? Maybe we should search the rest of Ordon. It’s the only clue we have, you know.’’, she said. Link nodded, and he walked back towards the Ordon Village. It was quiet and the moon was high in the sky. The animals were completely silent and this disturbed Link who had lived in this town for many years.There was a presence though. Link felt as though he was being watched, but it was Midna who saw something first. She whispered: ‘‘Link, over there!’’, pointing to a dark figure that slipped up the hill towards the ranch. Link grabbed his clawshot, but the figure had already disppeared over the hill. Link grabbed his bow, and followed- and Midna followed him. After some time, Link stood on top of the hill, looking for any movement in the ranch. He saw a few goats, eating grass in silence, but nothing else alive. Then he saw something at last. If he concentrated hard, he could that someone was hiding behind the goats. ‘‘ Link, do you see something?’’, Midna asked. Link nodded and pointed at the goats. He got an arrow from his quiver, and aimed as well as he could on a foot he could see next to the goat. He released the arrow, and a loud shriek followed, and all the goats panicked. Link lost no time and ran at who he had hit. ‘‘Ow... ow...’’, said a voice. It was a cloaked hooded figure. Link threw his hood off. It was the same man they saw at the market, who had led them here. ‘‘You... why did you try to lock us up? What are you trying to do?!’’ said Midna. ‘‘ Ow... you... lock you up?’’, said the man. ‘‘ I don’t know what you’re talking about, but I was trying to find a medicine to help you by examining these goats. But how can I possibly keep examing with this incredible pain in my foot?!’’, he said angrily. Link looked very ashamed, but Midna asked: ‘‘ If you aren’t the cloaked figure that locked us up, who is?’’. The man seemed puzzled. ‘‘ I’m not sure... well, I guess I’ll forgive you, but be careful who you shoot at next time. He stood up, and vanished. ‘‘ Whoa. I did not expect that.’’, said Midna, very surprized. Link nodded. Midna had no idea any more what to do now, but she couldn’t sleep with her breasts becoming bigger and bigger with every moment she delayed. ‘‘ Since the Palace of Twilight, my breasts have become more then 50 percent bigger. And my buttocks and hips... they’re bigger too. Not as significantly as my breasts.’’, Midna thought mournfully. ‘‘ What now?’’, thought Link.'' |
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Why is there no sex in this D:
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