I think I'm in Love

[gamonthehand]

well it was not the best thing i have ever seen. but its a great start. i hope this new guy shoots for the stars and does his best.

[POOPDRIPlieksMudkips]

Haha, check out the comments. I love deviantart. LOL NO CRITICISM ALLOWED POSITIVE COMMENTS ONLY OMG HE SAID IT NEEDS WORK TROLL TROLL TROLL.

[KaZe]

While the art is indeed lackluster, I found the dialog really funny for some reason.

[Muhznit]

My glasses cracked viewing that. Seriously. I think the artist either put no effort into it, or is just spiting the BE community. I'm liking the concept. Seriously, BE with a side of extreme horniness, and dissapearing clothing is pretty hot to me, but really... the drawing style killed it. Not even the text could save it. Even Shine-of-Rain did better.

NO DRAWING EFFORT
NO LITERARY EFFORT
MENTAL OUTPUT OF A HORNY TEENAGER ONLY
FINAL DESTINATION.

[Hooded_Miracle]

http://theblackmarket.deviantart.com...PEARS-41967927

That was done in MS Paint.

Along with a few other items in his gallery.

The thing about writing and drawing? You will ALWAYS suck at first, and will be told so accordingly. Work on it until you're awesome.

I mean, geez, I look at my first couple of writing's (Nightmare Before Christmas fanfiction? What the fuck?) and literally have to shake my head. I was terrible. Not the worst, but terrible.

I will admit he put effort into it. So did I. I just put more effort into my work over time.

Which is why my newest chapter I'm working on is over 7 pages long. That's long for me, but not NEARLY as long as the writing I've seen in other places.

Baby steps. Admittedly, the first baby steps will be full of verbal beatings, but a little at a time, right?

[Gobosan1]

that was just creepy
even by my standards
kupo

[blarxy12]

Well I hope the artist or another artist improves that comic.. I wonder what it'd turn out like...

[blarxy12]

Originally Posted by Muhznit

My glasses cracked viewing that. Seriously. I think the artist either put no effort into it, or is just spiting the BE community. I'm liking the concept. Seriously, BE with a side of extreme horniness, and dissapearing clothing is pretty hot to me, but really... the drawing style killed it. Not even the text could save it. Even Shine-of-Rain did better.

NO DRAWING EFFORT
NO LITERARY EFFORT
MENTAL OUTPUT OF A HORNY TEENAGER ONLY
FINAL DESTINATION.

you know... if someone else improved the art of it or the artist put more effort in it, or atleast get a scanner (I'm guessing he dosent) but you're rite, though that is great idea, bad art... well I wonder what'd happen if that artist met an artist that has bad ideas and good art?

[Gobosan1]

Originally Posted by blarxy12

you know... if someone else improved the art of it or the artist put more effort in it, or atleast get a scanner (I'm guessing he dosent) but you're rite, though that is great idea, bad art... well I wonder what'd happen if that artist met an artist that has bad ideas and good art?

i want to put a request in for this, but at the same time i don't feel like getting flamed YET AGAIN on a different thread
kupo

[Devonic]

I wouldn't go that far to say that the artist does better then the High praised ones. But then again I do not know who you consider to be "highly praised."

If your thinking of someone like jollyjack then i would disagree.

*edit* this is to Illun. Also I would have to say that yes I do agree the artwork is terrible but look passed that and you can see improvement.

[Styerion]

Well, it's not eye-burningly bad.
But it's not good.

Also, :controversy: Every work in the world is driven by sex or pleasure. :controversy:

Originally Posted by Devonic

I wouldn't go that far to say that the artist does better then the High praised ones. But then again I do not know who you consider to be "highly praised."

If your thinking of someone like jollyjack then i would disagree.

*edit* this is to Illun. Also I would have to say that yes I do agree the artwork is terrible but look passed that and you can see improvement.

jollyjack is more talented than most people I've seen here or anywhere.

I've seen more than one, but I won't name them for the same reason I find the comments here sickening. It's art, a form of expression. If you don't like it, tell the artist what areas to improve and encourage them. A few people commented that nipples were needed, and one mentioned a scanner, but that's it. Nothing about form, style, better tools, practicing methods, etc. Just "it sucks" and "its bad". Would you ever want to draw again if that was the response you got?