Up&Down (Interactive Story)

[joeman]

First, I must say I got this idea from Lord T Hawkeye's interactive story. Here is how it will work. I will write a part of the story here. At the end, there will be a brief summery and a question or state ment like What will you do now?or You were going to.... One can then post a short answer, like go do the laundry. The first person to respond will get their answer in the next part of the story. Look at Mr. Hawkeys's story if you are confused on this.

However, I must lay down some rules.

1.) Do not make the answer ridiculous. I have a sense of humor, but try have the answer make sense. The main character just cannot suddenly start flying or do something random. Characters cannot do the impossible(Growth aside).

2.) This is focused on Growth. Sorry no muscle growth.

3.) Try to keep it tasteful. I have the right to veto unnecessary sex and things like that. Do not expect me to get to graphic.

4.) Do not be greedy, let others have a turn. If you have posted an answer, let others go before you go again.

One difference I have from Mr Hawkeye is that I am not a good writer. So to make up, there will be a few pictures to go along with the story. So this might go along slowly, depending on my work schedule.
So...Shall we begin?

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You are Thomas Adams, and now you are not sleeping. The doorbell keeps ringing on and off. You roll over and yell out, "Can someone get that?" Still the doorbell keeps ringing. You get up and grumble. "That's right...mom is doing some errands...Looks like I'll have to get it...."

"I'm coming, I'm coming!" you shout as you go to get the door. You open the door and are greeted with the sight of Elise.

Elise is your classmate. Er...Former classmate...and best friend. You two went to high-school together. But you graduated two weeks ago. Elise is a nice girl: pretty, energetic, outgoing, smart enough. She is actually the same age as you, though a little shorter. Both of you were born on the same day at the same hospital. Your moms met in the hospital and that's pretty much why you two were good friends since childhood.

"Heya, sleepyhead!" She beamed. "Are you ready to go?"
"Huh?"
"You know..."she said, still smiling. "Our little day out today?"
"Errr..."
"You didn't forget did you?"she said as she looked at you with a small smirk. "Mr Smartypants, the valedictorian, forgot about our date?"
"DATE?!"
"Yeah...you know...Our play-date?" She said with a slightly confused look. "We're going off to collage soon, so we planed a day on the town. Our last time as kids. Remember?"
"Oh! Yeah! Of...of course!" you said slightly blushing. Truth be told, you had a tiny crush on her since the 4th grade. But you didn't tell her because...well...uh...because.

"Yeah, I remember! I just....woke up late!"
"It's 10:30. Did you stay up late...."She said with a small grin appearing on her face, "...doing something naughty?"
"ACK! NO! I was just building a model car!" No lies there. You had built a model car that night for your collection.
"OK. Well, you better get out of your PJs! Can't go around in those!"

You quickly got dressed into a T-shirt and some jeans. Elise was wearing some jeans and a green colored top. It was a button-up with no sleeves,just some weird ribbon things on the side. Was it some new summer fashion? whatever it was, she had left the two top buttons undone.

"You remember where we're going, right?" she asked you.
Actually you completely forgot..."Of course I remember." Great, you had to go and bluff.
"Is that so, Mr Smartypants?"

OK, so you're having a day on the town on a pretty beautiful day, but where are you going? "S-sure! EASY! We are going to the........

[Logan73]

Fun idea!

I think they should go to the Natural History Museum!

[Gobosan1]

joe migth i beg you to do the comic i mentioned on another thread?
kupo
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=15593

[joeman]

Originally Posted by Gobosan1

joe migth i beg you to do the comic i mentioned on another thread?
kupo
http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=15593

I do not really do requests. Sorry.


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"...To the Museum of Natural History!!!"
Did you just say...of all the places...the museum?...Why did you say that?...
"Hey! I guess you did remember!" Elise said with a big grin.
Wow. You are either a genius, very lucky, or she felt sorry for you.
"The museum just got a new Aztec exhibition! I did a report on the Aztecs, remember?" Elise said knocking you out of your shock.
"Oh..y-yeah..."
"In fact, I'm part Aztec myself!"
"No kidding? Wow. Well, I guess we should get going if we want to get there before lunch."

The museum wasn't that busy. Probably because normal people would have chosen to got to the mall or the beach. You checked out the dinosaurs and the mummies. You and Elise were having a pretty good time!

"Hey! look at this!" Elise said gesturing to one exhibit. "It's some old Aztec stone!" And it was some old Aztec stone. Only it had three small red stones coming out of the top.
"It says here it is called the Twin Stone." you read from a brochure. "The Aztecs used it as part as a war ceremony. Hmm...They seemed to think it was filled with some kind of spiritual energy. They would present it to a brave warrior and it would help him win in battle."
"Um...Tom...Why is it called the Twin Stone?"
"Well, I guess there were two." you say looking over the brochure. "Aha! The other one is at an archeological collage being examined. It seems someone dropped it and they wanted to make sure it wasn't broken."
"That makes sense..." Elise said. Suddenly a large growling noise came from her stomach. "Oh! Lunchtime already?" she said with a slight blush.

"Hmmm...do you think we should go now or look at some more exhibits before lunch?"

[Gobosan1]

Originally Posted by joeman

I do not really do requests. Sorry.

well then i'll just review your old stuff and wait for the right time to grovel
kupo
(not really)
thanks though
kupo

[LOD]

A growing girl needs to eat! I vote going out to lunch.

[BlazingBarrager]

She's not growing yet, but yeah I second that.

[joeman]

"Yeah, I'm getting hungry too." you agree. "Let's get out of here and grab a pizza or something."
"MMMM. Yeah!"

As you exit the museum you hear an alarm go off. "Huh? What's going on?"
"Get him!" you hear people yell. "He stole it! Don't let him get away!"
The doors fly open as a man runs out of museum, with something in his hand. "STOP! THIEF!" you hear the guards yell after him. It seems the guards are chasing him. In fact...he is running directly at you and Elise!

It seems this man stole something from the museum and is running at you! He could be dangerous! What do you do?

[Logan73]

That drawing is awesome.

Errrr. I Trip him? yeh..

[BlazingBarrager]

Hmm...you know this story so far reminds me of what I used to dream a long time ago (I could dream different scenes like I was watching TV). It involved a teen girl (around eighteen I think) finding an ancient artifact in the museum and being attracted to it.

Maybe I can write that sometime.

Oh and BTW Joeman, if you need someone to help you with your writing I can give you a hand.

[DanTails]

Take his sweet hat. You can't let a criminal get away with such a stylish esamble.