Finally gonna draw something

[NFM]

http://nfb68.deviantart.com/art/Elisabeth-119193781

I've been here for how long and not done anything?
Anyway, if she's not big enough now, just wait.

[Kojiro Highwind]

Eeeehhhh.... id critique this but lately all my critiquing has been thrown back in my face in a negative way....... I'll just wait and see what other people think of this.

Keep drawing though. Practice makes perfect.

[SoylentOrange]

Aside from some kinda whacked-out proportions (And not in the good, "Huge boobs" way) the whole thing just seems very flat, like she's a collection of construction paper cutouts.

[NFM]

I know exactly what you're saying.
I just can't seem to figure it out, I know that the limitations of using flash is partially related, but could you give me any tips?

[Kojiro Highwind]

Originally Posted by NFM

I know exactly what you're saying.
I just can't seem to figure it out, I know that the limitations of using flash is partially related, but could you give me any tips?

Use reference when drawing to get better. try imitating the style of your fave artist. Sure you are just using flash but that doesn't mean you can't still do these things I mentioned :3.

[ltmiroku]

well i'll give you a few first i do wanna say the char looks cute i like the most is the face and hair realy cute and for a be i think it was well done i enjoyed it^.^

only tips i can say is you should of left the arms relaxed a lil bit cause it looks as if there squeezed tightly on the char past what realy can be done.

other then that nice job any other person wanna give a tip plz do ^.^

[ZeroVirus]

It stinks. -3-

[ltmiroku]

Originally Posted by ZeroVirus

It stinks. -3-

thats a lil harsh don't you think?

[ZeroVirus]

Maybe so, but I'm... not good with words to criticize. Maybe someone else can find things to improve and tell him. Me... not so much. To me, it's just bad. Sorry.

[DevonCory]

@NFM
I think it's a good start. Practice makes perfect and since this is one of your early work, it ain't half bad. Probably better than what many of the critiques around can come up with.

That being said, the character's look very stiff. Her posture isn't bad, but it certainly lack dynamism. Proportions are fine, except for the hands and forearms. Those however, with the feet, are probably the hardest to draw correctly anyway.

Keep it up!

[Ryu_Knight]

hmm, its a good start but what I think a lot of people are trying to say is thats its just too flat and needs more deph to it, it looks like you ran her over with a steam roller and scaned that. like I said its a good start and you can only get better from here

I see you put her arm over her one breast but you didn't do anything to the breast or arm, you jsut threw it over top and just left that, wheres the squish of the arm on her breast since they are so large that puttung her arm on it wll put a dent in them

like people have said work on your proportions, study other artest styles, look at real people, find a few how to draw books for tips[I suggest how to draw manga-female characters] if you want to see how your just only gonna get better you can check out my DA page and see how I've grown in drawing

http://knightshadowx.deviantart.com/

so just keep trying and ignor any bad or mean comments from people, make some friends who will support you, if you listen to waht we are saying to and learn and get better your bond to find yourself a fan base here

[Ninja Jay]

Hmmmmmm.......
Good first try
I give it a 7 or 8 out of 10