A mixture of BE and horror... (story)

[coldasice]

A friend of mine wrote this story, which is still work in progress. Unfortunately, he's been AWOL for most of the time as of late, so I reckon I'll just post this here (with his permission) and see how the feedback goes. Maybe that'll nudge him to write faster.


Disclaimer: The story was written with body horror as the main theme, so if that's not your thing, by all means don't read. (Though so far, there's only 1 person from the first readers who refuse to read the story any further)

[ashe5k]

A very interesting way of doing it, and definitely very creepy at the same time.

[Metatron]

Wow that was great!!
I wish the BEAC would pic it up and have Johnny Swell make some images for it

[fredzor]

It works well as a horror story, but that's about it.

[TF-Viewer]

Certainly interesting.

[GenYun]

That was awesome!

[avatar2xl]

I dug it

[Stephen19]

It was really good! That size of breast impressing, but the way they reach it is truly fits for a horror-story

[Muhznit]

That's all? The ending seems kind of lacking. At the risk of sounding like I find guro sexy, I'm VERY eager to read more. It's easy to write an erotic BE story, and slightly more difficult to write a funny or epic one, but to turn it into a horror story? That. Takes. Skill.

Props to you, hoping to see further chapters.

[coldasice]

Originally Posted by Muhznit

That's all? The ending seems kind of lacking. At the risk of sounding like I find guro sexy, I'm VERY eager to read more. It's easy to write an erotic BE story, and slightly more difficult to write a funny or epic one, but to turn it into a horror story? That. Takes. Skill.

Props to you, hoping to see further chapters.

I'm sorry, the story was still in progress. I was hoping the positive comments here would nudge my friend to write faster as well (this story was not written by me, though the idea did come from me).

[Enji]

That easily qualifies as nightmare fuel. Although the premise sort of reminds me of the story entitled Vacuum.

A good read overall.

[sh00rs1gn]

Having read this piece I didn't really find anything erotic about it and I wasn't really horrified by it but I was more saddened.
Call me overly sensitive but the thought of a girl in a completely helpless situation upsets me, especially given it's resulted in the deaths of her friends and innocents.
I do hope this has a happy ending to it as this has actually haunted me somewhat over the past few days (that being said, going through a bit of a rough patch right now emotionally so it's probably related).
Would certainly love to read more, give your friend a pat on the back.