Muscle Cuties!

[Rabukurafuto]

Hello there. I just joined The Process Forum and I wanted to introduce my on-going muscle expansion, breast expansion, and yuri story Muscle Cuties! The story is about a girl named Kokoro Asagiri meeting a princess from the Moon named Prin Pi Moonglow, and Prin turns Kokoro into a muscled, busty warrior to act as her protector. Kokoro and Prin go to find more people to recruit in Prin's fight to save her home and her family from the monstrous "Lunatics".

Uncut version on FictionPress

Slightly edited version on deviantART

I hope you like it

[Lock]

I bid thee welcome here! Also, mind sharing your other stories with process with us?

[Rabukurafuto]

Thank you for the greeting! I need to go back and look at the expansion stories I have don to place them in the right areas.

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

muscle expansion

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

breast expansion

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

and yuri story

I smell epic win here.

I've just read the first chapter. It's kind of amazing how you managed to put ALL the clich? of the sentai/mahou genre in it. It may sound like a bad thing, but it's actually cool to read a perfect transposition of a Sailor Moon episode (including chibi stuff) featuring muscles, boobs and swords instead of staff and ribbons.

The line << "My muscles and boobs are so big now," she said. "I look like a freak. >> seemed a bit out of place though. She was very happy of her muscles only a few lines before.

[Rabukurafuto]

Ah, I am very glad you liked the first chapter! Yes, I was going for the magical girl warrior and sentai feeling for the story. I the rest is as good to you.

Originally Posted by j2k

The line << "My muscles and boobs are so big now," she said. "I look like a freak. >> seemed a bit out of place though. She was very happy of her muscles only a few lines before.

About that, Kokoro is meant to be a very typical Japanese girl, and the majority of Japanese girls want to seem small in height and weight. Kokoro thinks her muscles and breasts feel good, but she's also doubtful because her R?surrection body looks abnormal by mainstream tastes. It is something she will need to overcome.

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

About that, Kokoro is meant to be a very typical Japanese girl, and the majority of Japanese girls want to seem small in height and weight. Kokoro thinks her muscles and breasts feel good, but she's also doubtful because her R?surrection body looks abnormal by mainstream tastes. It is something she will need to overcome.

I see. And you also gave her a wild tan, which is another thing Japanese girls dislike XD

I already read up to Fukune's chapter too. If you're aiming to have the reader thinking he's watching an anime episode, you definitely succeded. French names for magical stuff help too.

I also like how you managed to give the girls different personalities and reactions. While Kokoro is the shy kind, Fukune is the one who really enjoys strenght and muscles.

[Rabukurafuto]

Fukune? I think you might mean Tatsumi.

It's good you like it so far. Knowing you think it's like watching an anime is a great compliment The French is difficult to work with (I need to buy a French-Japanese dictionary!) but it can be fun. I was hoping every one would have a distinct personality for a colorful group of characters, so I thank you for noticing that too!

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

Fukune? I think you might mean Tatsumi.

Yeah, sorry. The chapter is named "Fukune & Night" and I mismatched ^_-

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

It's good you like it so far. Knowing you think it's like watching an anime is a great compliment The French is difficult to work with (I need to buy a French-Japanese dictionary!) but it can be fun. I was hoping every one would have a distinct personality for a colorful group of characters, so I thank you for noticing that too!

French-Japanese?

Do you mean you're japanese? I mean, a japanese who has such a perfect knowledge of the English language? I read about these mystical creatures on some books but I couldn't imagine they really exists ^_-

[Rabukurafuto]

Well, Japanese with an American father

[j2k]

Originally Posted by Rabukurafuto

Well, Japanese with an American father

Oh, full poker for you then

羨ましいぃ~、まったく >.<

[Rabukurafuto]

So, please enjoy! I'm taking a hiatus on the story for now, but I will write another chapter soon.

[Rabukurafuto]

I'm here to announce that another chapter of Muscle Cuties! shall be released very soon.