BESC: The God's Labyrinth

[EchoWing]

And lo and behold, the fourth installment is up.

[EchoWing]

And the fifth's up now, and I've been informed that payment's been authorized for them.

Just so folks are aware, there's at least one more on the way - apparently, I packed so much into the script, they had to expand it a little, so the scripted second part became the final second and third. Not complaining, of course, but I obviously have a lot to learn about writing comics.

[catfish27]

Originally Posted by EchoWing

Just so folks are aware, there's at least one more on the way - apparently, I packed so much into the script, they had to expand it a little, so the scripted second part became the final second and third.

Yeah, I figured this would be the case when the second chapter didn't have any transformations in it.

Over on the BEA forum, a couple people have complained because there hasn't been any straight-up BE in the story since the first chapter, but I want to assure you, I'm still enjoying it. (But the main complaints in that thread are because the November updates came on November 23rd and December 1st. Not your problem, of course.)

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by catfish27

Yeah, I figured this would be the case when the second chapter didn't have any transformations in it.

Over on the BEA forum, a couple people have complained because there hasn't been any straight-up BE in the story since the first chapter, but I want to assure you, I'm still enjoying it. (But the main complaints in that thread are because the November updates came on November 23rd and December 1st. Not your problem, of course.)

Yeah, I think I cast a bit too wide a net with my fetishes here. Thankfully, I've got an idea in mind for another comic, and it'll involve a lot more straight-up BE. I'm with them on the annoyance concerning the late updates, however.

Anyway, glad you're enjoying it. Here's hoping you like the conclusion!

[EchoWing]

Just a head's up - the sixth part's been posted, and the seventh is due in the near future. Odds are Part 7 will be the last installment.

Thanks for the commentary. It's sort of a given that I cast a bit too wide of a fetish net with this story, but fortunately, I'm good at learning from my mistakes. Rest assured, the next submission I do for the BESC will be a bit more BE-focused.

Anyway, here's hoping you all enjoy how it wraps up. Also, would anyone be interested in a follow-up to this story?

[catfish27]

Originally Posted by EchoWing

Also, would anyone be interested in a follow-up to this story?

I think I should wait until I get to the end before answering this.

[SoylentOrange]

I think you cast a fine net. The BESC *needs* this kind of variety in their stories.

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

I think you cast a fine net. The BESC *needs* this kind of variety in their stories.

Thanks, though based on what I've heard, I'd probably be wiser to keep the other fetishes to a minimum and keep the focus on BE. And fortunately, the next two comic ideas I have should let me do pretty much that.

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by catfish27

I think I should wait until I get to the end before answering this.

Fair enough. I await your comments at month's end then.

[catfish27]

And now that it's finished...a very satisfying ending. I wouldn't say I need a follow-up, since everything wrapped up pretty nicely.

Of course, it's also good to have a BESC serial actually come to a conclusion, and in a reasonable amount of time, so thanks for that.

[EchoWing]

Originally Posted by catfish27

And now that it's finished...a very satisfying ending. I wouldn't say I need a follow-up, since everything wrapped up pretty nicely.

Of course, it's also good to have a BESC serial actually come to a conclusion, and in a reasonable amount of time, so thanks for that.

Thanks. I like having stories with proper endings. I think there's enough leeway in there that I could end up doing more with the characters, but if I never do, I think I've left them in good shape. Here's hoping you like my next few submissions as much as you did this one!

[mercury01]

What's the BESC?