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Sir Psycho Sexy
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,955
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Re: Lorraine Jennings and the Curvy Corset
I was in fact going for an in media res thingy with that... And my main problem in absolutely EVERYTHING I do is I don't describe. Ever. It's a very bad problem for a writer, I know.
And I can too ask people what's wrong with my story! Otherwise, nobody'll ever offer. |
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