Looking for understanding of Japanese Translation

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Its more of a word fragment its from "before after" in InDeep Vol.3
I have been trying to translate it and its pretty much the same as if one were to just look at the pictures, but I wanted an accurate translation.
Here is a link to the story and here is a copy of my translation. I was not sure when to put small words vs big so most are big just out of times sake. The text in question is on page 11
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/147018/55008e58cf/