Death knight to fertility knight

[Katt]

Originally Posted by Lurking Guy

Two qualms.

One, I think you may want to simplify your designs. Like, a lot. Both because you'll be spending time on those little details you could spend putting out more material and because, well, it just does not look good. If you tone it down it could look okay, but right now the "fertile" one looks even more horrifying than the troll.

Two, you have neither a story nor a "concept" here for us to evaluate. You just have "I want to start my comic with a troll and end it with a hot chick." You'll probably want to get more details than that hammered down before you start asking opinions and trying to make a commitment.

I can agree on the first point but thats a matter of the artist's opinion and 'skill'. Maybe s/he just reflexively adds these details and it doesn't take them that long.

But the second qualm I don't agree with. The artist started their story and concept. "Deathknight becoming Fertility Knight who then affects others." So I assume that means she'll be going around making women preggers, BE , or fall in love with a dude with magic, etc etc.

Anyways, bonus points for using one of the 'ugly' races of the game I say!