Something In The Water 2 Arrival Mini GTS FMG Image Story

[DevonCory]

It was quite good. All of the growth scenes were nicely detailed, and all had a certain uniqueness to them. Often you see these kinds of sequences and all are repeats of one another, always showing the same kind of growth and effects. Not so here, which is definitely a good thing. Mary Sue's extra bit of BE was particularly nice. Then again, I'm a fan of BE.

One thing I found however was that, when it came to muscle growth, most of the girls grow to a certain level, and if they are to grow further, they only grow taller and larger and not necessarily more muscular. Such a thing is fine when it comes to GTS, but it could be nice to see some more details when it comes to the FMG part. For example, if a girl is growing while flexing her arm, instead of just showing the arm growing larger and more 'gigantic', it could be nice to see the actual muscles growing thicker, the biceps peak rising higher... this kind of things.

Otherwise, good stuff. I wouldn't mind seeing more straight-up breast expansion and nipple expansion, but nevertheless, I'll be getting part 3 for sure as soon as it comes out.

[ZZZ]

Originally Posted by DevonCory

It was quite good. All of the growth scenes were nicely detailed, and all had a certain uniqueness to them. Often you see these kinds of sequences and all are repeats of one another, always showing the same kind of growth and effects. Not so here, which is definitely a good thing. Mary Sue's extra bit of BE was particularly nice. Then again, I'm a fan of BE.

One thing I found however was that, when it came to muscle growth, most of the girls grow to a certain level, and if they are to grow further, they only grow taller and larger and not necessarily more muscular. Such a thing is fine when it comes to GTS, but it could be nice to see some more details when it comes to the FMG part. For example, if a girl is growing while flexing her arm, instead of just showing the arm growing larger and more 'gigantic', it could be nice to see the actual muscles growing thicker, the biceps peak rising higher... this kind of things.

Otherwise, good stuff. I wouldn't mind seeing more straight-up breast expansion and nipple expansion, but nevertheless, I'll be getting part 3 for sure as soon as it comes out.

Hi Devon,

Thanks for buying the comic and the feedback.

I actually do increase the muscle mass in each frame, I just decrease the amount it increases by at the later stages to prevent going overboard(for my tastes that is). I'll see about making the muscle increase more noticeable at the later stages while keeping it in the size I prefer in later FMG comics.

There will definitely be more breast expansion in upcoming comics, and I'll see if I can work some nipple growing focus at some point too. My next comic will also be FMG/BE and mini GTS, along with full size GTS and should be out later this month.

-ZZZ