Magic Muscle by pokkuti

[Horrorhill99]

What kind of plot have you thought up yet, given the ideas already given?

[whoknows]

Plot wise, haven't really think about this in scriptwriting at all. But the content wise, as I have stated above, should give a clear indication of what plans I have laid out on.

[Horrorhill99]

If you need help writing, I don't mind lending a hand. I've done some writing assignments in the past and I've been told that I've managed to nail the characters quite well.

[whoknows]

Hrm, sure why not, just do a private message to me on script. Have you checked the above statements I have made?

[Horrorhill99]

Originally Posted by whoknows

Hrm, sure why not, just do a private message to me on script. Have you checked the above statements I have made?

Yeah, might be a while though. Don't expect anything too soon.

[whoknows]

Sure thing, plus I don't mind if anyone helps out Horror as well on the scriptwriting.

[someguyontheinterwebnets]

waaaaaaaaaaaaant more!

[whoknows]

You'll have to wait bud:P As always, artists of that talent have a long client list, so be patient young one:P

[whoknows]

Plus I might need a donation system of sorts, cause this might be a bit much for me to handle on, in terms of monetary means. Depends on how Pokkuti will respond to the scriptwriting as well too.

[Horrorhill99]

I've been working with 'whoknows' for the last day or so on a few script ideas for what he calls Chapters 2 and 3 of the project. These are up for review and input.

First up is Chapter 2

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

Its only on the 2nd Chapter right now, following your idea as best as possible...

Page 1:

First scene with Grey and Natsu looking surprised, with Natsu looking especially excited. (not sure if this would take place in the guild building or somewhere else)

Natsu: Aw man, this is awesome!

Grey: Good to see you guys doing well with training. How'd you get this big so fast?

Cut to Lucy, Erza and Wendy, showing off their new figures (I'm guessing they are wearing new clothing now) Wendy is holding onto the jar, Lucy is a bit embarrassed, while Erza is more proud than anything else.

Lucy: Thanks, guys. It was nothing.

Erza: It was a gift from Porlyusica. She gave us these 'Muscle Magic Candies' to help with the training. The results are fantastic.

Cut back to Grey

Grey: Good. We could use these after being inactive for so long. Fairy Tail needs to get back on its-

Wendy(off-screen): Natsu!

Cut to Natsu having grabbed a candy and eating it, with Wendy being rather blustered by his actions.

Wendy: Don't be so pushy!

Natsu: Its okay, I got this!

Page 2:

Cut to a series of pics featuring Natsu getting ready for the transformation, yet shrinking in size instead of getting bigger (I'm guessing the clothes end up getting looser or something)

Natsu: With this, we're going to win the tournament. Fairy Tail will be back to being the #1 guild in Fiora!

Shot of Grey and Lucy looking on in confusion and surprise.

Grey(thinking): Damn reckless...

Lucy(thinking): Why is he getting smaller?

Page 3:
Final pic of a now kid-sized Natsu, still excited and such, either not noticing the change or too caught up in the moment.

Natsu: Oooooooooooooooooh yeah! I'm burning up!

Cut to surprise reactions from Grey and Lucy.

Lucy: AH! He turned into a kid!?!

Grey: Natsu, you dumbass!

Cut to Erza, more intrigured than shock, with Lucy still being shocked.

Erza: Huh, guess it works differently on men than women.

Lucy: Didn't Porlyusica tell you about this.

Page 4:
Cut back to Grey, who is facepalming at Natsu's reckless and stupid behavior.

Grey: This is great. Now we need to waste time in order to get him normal...IF we can get him back to normal.

Wendy(off-screen): Its okay, Grey.

Cut to Wendy, who has already eaten another candy, smiling. Cue a chibi Erza with a shocked expression.

Wendy: I can take care of Natsu until then.

Erza(shocked): You took another one, Wendy?

Now onto scenes of Wendy getting bigger muscles, getting taller and tearing apart her clothing in the process (doesn't need to be much, I'm guessing).

Cut to reaction shots from Grey, Lucy, and Erza.

Grey: Woah, so that's how they work.

Lucy: Did Wendy just get taller?

Erza: Wow, you look a lot more mature now, Wendy.

Cut back to Wendy, now in her new size, clearly pleased with herself.

Wendy: Thanks. This feels great. I don't think I've ever felt this good before.

Cue to Wendy picking up chibi!Natsu

Wendy: Its okay, Natsu. I'll be your bis sis for now.

...and now for Chapter 3...

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

Alright, that can be done. I'm guessing this takes place around chapter 2 as well.

Page 1:
Taking a new perspective from the beginning of Chapter 2, Juvia is looking out from behind a door frame, seeing the newly muscular Erza, Lucy, and Wendy along with Natsu and Grey. She is clearly surprised. (Can add some beginning dialogue from Chapter 2 here)

Cut to behind the door frame, where Levy and Lisanna are also present.

Lisanna: Do you see them, Juvia?

Juvia: Its incredible. I don't think I've seen anything like it before.

Levy: That's impossible. How could they get so big so quickly.

Juvia: Sounds like they had help from Porylusica. Maybe we should go see her.

Lisanna: You really think she would help us? Last time I checked, she doesn't like humans.

Levy: We just wouldn't stay too long, okay? We get some more of these 'muscle magic candy' from her and just leave. Shouldn't be too hard.

Cut to Juvia fantasizing about her new body, looking forward to the experience.

Juvia: This will be great. With a new form, I'll surely earn Grey's love!

Levy and Lisanna just look on in confusion.

Page 2:
Cut over to Porylusica's home, with a subtext stating that a while has passed. Can see that the three girls have gotten a large jar of the 'muscle candy' with them.

Juvia: That was much easier than I expected.

Levy: Like I said, just make the visit quick enough and she wouldn't need to shoo us off with a broom.

Lisanna: Think we should test these out first.

Juvia, excited at the proposal, immediately grabs for one of the candies.

Juvia: Yes, for the sake of love, I shall take the first piece.

Levy: Woah, calm down.

Juvia reacts to the awful taste before beginning to grow larger muscles. Levy and Lisanna react with a mixture of shock/awe.

Page 3:
Juvia: Wow, this was more incredible than I had hoped. I feel amazing.

Levy: Yeah, that looked...interesting, to say the least.

Juvia: Oh? You don't want to join in too?

Levy: Maybe later. Right now, we should get back to the guild.

Juvia: Really? You want to hold off on something like this? (Juvia flexes a bit)

Lisanna: Well, let me give it a shot. (she takes a candy while Levy looks on in surprise. Like Juvia, Lisanna reacts to the horrible taste and starts growing larger muscles). Woah, this feels amazing. Guess I know why my brother wants to be stronger too.

Page 4:
Juvia: You look great, Lisanna. Want to join in too, Levy?

Levy: I don't know now. After seeing the results first hand...

Lisanna: Come on. I bet Gajeel would like it. (Levy gets a bit flustered at what Lisanna said and quickly downs a piece of candy. Same reaction as Juvia and Lisanna. Her reacts is more embrassed than surprised)

Levy: Ah, I didn't expect to get this...big.

Juvia: You look fine, Levy. We all do. Lets get some new clothes before heading back to the guild, then we can show them the new 'us'.

Edit: and now I got Chapter 4 up.

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

Page 1:
Cutting back to Grey, Erza, Lucy, Wendy and Natsu, with Grey, Erza and Lucy watching Wendy holding Natsu like the kid he currently was.

Grey: Still can't believe that candy did that to Natsu. And Wendy is starting to act strange.

Lucy: Wait, starting to?

Erza: Let's focus back on Natsu. Now that he is in that state, I doubt he'll be of much use in the tournament.

Wendy: That is still months away. Its not that big of a problem now.

Erza: He wouldn't be much help in training. If anything, he'll hold us back.

Natsu: No I won't! I can still fight like this. Just need some time to get this body back in order!

Grey: (under his breath)Great job, Natsu. Figure he would've learned by now. (Looking at Wendy) What about you, Wendy? You're already big enough as is. Don't you think this is going too far?

Wendy(putting Natsu down): Relax, okay? We still got plenty of strong mages in the guild. Think about it. (Wendy takes another candy and eats it) Most of the mages we have can be considered S-Class...(Wendy starts growing even bigger muscles and gains some more height) ...and with this, we got an even better chance at winning!

Natsu(bit upset): Oh come on!

Page 2:
Grey(bit frustrated): Can you get focused, Wendy? We're going to need to train to match up with the other guilds. This won't cut it!

Wendy(picking Natsu back up): I know what you're saying! The training is important, but this can help too. This for the guild remember. (Grey tries to get a remark in, but is stopped by Erza)

Erza: Wendy does have the right idea, but we need to tread cautiously.

Lucy: Uh, Grey, maybe it would be better if you went to see Porylusica and see if you can help get Natsu back to normal. (Grey delivers a glare back to Wendy, then to Erza).

Grey: Fine. We're just lucky that Guild Master Makarov isn't here now. He'd probably throw a fit. (Grey then walks out of the room, leaving the scene)

Wendy(playing a bit with Natsu's hair): Aw, even after all that, he still cares for Natsu.

Lucy: He thinks Natsu would probably do the same if the situation was reversed.

Natsu(slyly): Maybe...

Erza: You sure about this, Wendy? Taking more than one...

Wendy: I'm trying to think of the guild here, not just us. We need to be at our best, right? (She tosses a candy each to Lucy and Erza) Its not an easy road, right?

Page 3:
Erza: Right. (She quickly downs the candy, getting even more muscular than before) Ugh, that taste. (Lucy follows in suite, eating the candy and getting muscular. Wendy marvels (lol,pun) are Erza's and Lucy's new looks.)

Page 4:
Lucy: I think I'm starting to get used to this new look.

Erza: Agreed. It doesn't feel that bad anymore.

Natsu: Okay, now you guys are just taunting me. This is so unfair!

Wendy: Great. Maybe now, we can get some actually training done.

[whoknows]

If anyone else wants to have input into what horror has made upon for the script writing, you guys can do so before I do give the script to Pokkuti!

[Horrorhill99]

...and now we can throw in Chapter 4 script idea. Awaiting some responses and suggestions.