Magic Muscle by pokkuti

[whoknows]

Believe me non stop growth with Wendy is what I am trying to aim:P. Can imagine her gulping entire jars just to see herself grow forever:P

[geno13]

As long as height growth is involved, i don't mind that at all.

[whoknows]

Oh, trust me, there definitely will be height aspect, it is just as important as muscle and femininity wise. To proportion their bodies out for the sense of appeal to the readers:P.

[Horrorhill99]

And now a script for Chapter 5 is up

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

Good news. Got a possible script down for Chapter 5. Just want to run it by you.

Page 1:
Grey continues his walk over to Porylusica's still thinking over the events from last chapter. Voice calls out to him from off panel!

Juvia: Grey! Over here, Grey.
Grey. Sounds like Juvia. Good. Maybe she can try and talk some sense into-

Grey turns to Juvia and is clearly surprised.
Grey:-holy crap!

Cut to Levy, Juvia and Lisanna, sporting their new bodies from chapter 3 (as well as new clothes). Lisanna is holding onto the jar of 'candy' at this point

Juvia: Hello, Grey. Do you like the new and improved Juvia?

Grey tries to remain focused while explaining to Juvia about the situation.

Grey: I can't believe you ate some of that candy too!
Juvia: Are you not pleased?
Grey: Well, considering that Erza, Lucy and Wendy took some more and-

Cut to a chib-style frame with a surprised Juvia and an angry Grey.
Juvia: Really? Then we need more candy in order to catch up!
Grey: Can you please let me finish?

Page 2:
Cut to Lisanna already grabbing ahold of 3 more pieces of candy and pacing it out amongst the trio.
Juvia: No time, my love. Ready, Lisanna?
Lisanna: Here, one for each of us.

While Juvia and Lisanna prepare to eat to their candy, Levy asks Grey, who is just smiling nervously.
Levy: Do you want one too, Grey?
Grey: Er, no thanks. I'm fine.

Rest of page involves girls growing larger muscles and reacting to their new bodies with glee.

Page 3:
Grey has the look of shock across his face, with Gajeel coming up from off panel to see what is going on.
Grey: What the hell-again?
Gajeel: Hey Grey, what's going on over here?

Levy(with Juvia and Lisanna near here) blushes at the site of Gajeel, who himself gets surprised at Levy's new look.
Levy: Gajeel? I wasn't expecting you...this is...wow.
Gajeel: Wait, that's you, Levy!?!

Levy flexes a bit, trying impress Gajeel, but keeps blushing a bit.
Levy: I figured that...well, maybe...what do you think?

One panel shows a serious look from Grey and Gajeel to Levy, quickly followed by another panel with Gajeel giving a thumbs up expression with Grey surprised.
Grey: Really? You're okay with this?

Page 4:
Gajeel smiles smugly, with Grey just face-palming.
Gajeel: Why not? The guild can always get stronger. Doesn't seem that bad.
Grey: UGH, alright fine.

Grey refocuses himself and continues his journey, leaving Gajeel with the 3 muscular ladies
Grey: Just head back to the guild with the rest of girls, alright? Natsu is in a bit of trouble and I need a level-head to watch out for him, okay?

Juvia, Levy, and Lisanna follow Gajeel back to the guild, with Juvia looking a bit sad at Grey's lack of appreciation to her body. Levy, however, is happy that Gajeel likes her new look. Gajeel is just smiling.
Lisanna: Hm, wonder what could've happened to Natsu?
Gajeel: Knowing the Salamander, it was probably his fault to begin with.

And that's about it for Chapter 5.

[whoknows]

Hehe, the evolution of Fairy Tail as a guild will be quite a change for all males:P.

[whoknows]

Some REALLY good news for you guys! Pokkuti has update his commission list and it seems that I am #2 on the slot!. Talk about immediate placement on the top... I was estimating the time-frame that he would commission mines during mid summer or late summer.... but this...wow.. this definitely pushes my plans earlier than what I expect it to be.

[Horrorhill99]

Got the idea for Chapter 6 up and done, waiting for public opinions and suggestions.

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

Finally got Chapter 6 down, of sorts. Still open to some changes, of course.

Chapter 6
Page 1:
Cut to a beach site with Erza, Lucy, and Wendy (donned in swimwear) getting ready to relax at the beach. In Wendy's arms is baby Natsu from previous chapters.
Lucy: You sure this is such a good idea, guys? Shouldn't we start training soon?
Erza: Its alright, The tournament is still months away and we can still spend some time training while relaxing?
Natsu: Why don't you try spending some time getting me back to normal?
Wendy: Aw, you're so cute when you're angry, Natsu.
Natsu: Wendy! Cut it out!.

Cut to Erza and Lucy looking over their right and left shoulders respectively, hearing a familiar friend's voice.
Levy(off-panel): Hey Lucy! Erza!
Lucy: Oh, hi Lev-
Cut to small chibi-Lucy with a shocked expression on her face.
Lucy; -EEEEEEEEE?!?!

Page 2:
Cut to Lisanna(who is holding a bag around her shoulder), Levy, Gajeel(who is carrying a folding chair) and Juvia, all decked out in appropriate swimwear as well.
Lucy: Levy? Lisanna? Juvia?

Cut to Lucy and Levy talking to each other.
Lucy: How did you-did you get some of the candies too?
Levy: Yeah. We paid a visit to Porylusica too.

Cut to Erza and Juvia talking as well, with Juvia blushing a bit.
Erza: It looks like the candies are working out well for you three.
Juvia: Oh thank you. I'm hoping that if I put this to good use...

Cut to Juvia flexing, with Levy and Gajeel in the background looking on (could have both in chibi form if wanted to)
Juvia:...I'll win Gray's heart. Just you wait!
Levy: Uh doesn't she remember how Gray reacted before?
Gajeel: Eh, she'll be fine.

Page 3:
Cut to Wendy(who is still holding Natsu) and Lisanna, who is surprised when she sees Natsu.
Lisanna: Hey, who are you holding, Wendy?
Natsu: Lisanna! Its me!
Lisanna: Wait, Natsu? You turned into a baby?

Cut to a shocked Levy and a laughing Gajeel.
Gajeel: Gahahahaha! I can't believe Salamander got himself turned into a kind.

Cut to Erza and Lucy, shrugging or sighing.
Erza: Yeah. He was being too brash and tried eating one of the candies beforehand.
Lucy: That's Natsu for you.

Cut back to a now surprised Gajeel.
Gajeel: Really? That candy makes girls more muscular and turns men into kids? What kind of magic is this?

Cut to Levy flexing one of her arms while delivering a playful smile.
Levy: Its alright, Gajeel. It doing wonders for me, right?
Gajeel: Uh, yeah. Can't complain about that, right?

Page 4:
Lisanna is trying to get Natsu back from Wendy, but Wendy keeps Natsu clear from Lisanna's reach.
Lisanna: You can't do this to Natsu. He's our friend.
Wendy: Don't worry. I'm taking good care of him.

Cut to Lisanna, preparing to take something out of her bag.
Lisanna: He may look like a baby, but you don't have to treat him like on!

Cut back to Lucy and Erza, looking over the event transpiring.
Lucy: Erza, do you think she's-
Erza: Pretty good guess.

Cut to Juvia and Levy, with Juvia surprised and Levy looking off-panel.
Juvia: Lisanna, are you sure this is a good idea?

Cut to Levy and Gajeel, revealing that Levy is watching Gajeel preparing his seat with the folding chair.
Levy: What do you think you're doing, Gajeel?
Gajeel: Getting a seat ready. I'm guessing things are just going to escalate soon and I feel like setting up a front-side view of it all.

...and that is Chapter 6 in a nutshell..

[Horrorhill99]

...and now Chapter 7 is up!

Originally Posted by Horrorhill99

No prob. Glad to help.

Speaking of help, I've got an idea for Chapter 7 that I think you might like.

Chapter 7
Page 1
Lucy catches the jar of 'muscle candies', which has been thrown to her form off-panel.
Lucy: Wha? Lisanna?

Cut to Lisanna, preparing to chomp down on two pieces of muscle candies.
Lisanna: Just hold onto that, Lucy. This won't take long.

Sequence of Lisanna growing larger (height-wise and muscle-wise, with any tears in clothing that do not break modesty)

Cut to Lisanna charging Wendy to get to Natsu.
Lisanna: Give Natsu here, Wendy!
Wendy: No way! You might hurt him!

Page 2:
Background has Wendy and Lisanna fighting a bit, with Erza and Lucy in the foreground, looking a bit worried at the situation.
Lucy: We need to stop this, Erza.
Erza: Right, though we need to be cautious. Natsu could be seriously hurt if we go in too reckless.

Cut to Levy and Juvia, also looking worried, with Gajeel in the background, lounging in a beach chair.
Juvia: How? Wendy and Lisanna are so much stronger now.
Levy: Maybe we should have some more of the 'muscle candies' to even the odds,

Cut back to Erza, who is a bit reluctant, while Lucy is a bit shocked.
Erza: Hm...fine. Might as well. Lucy-
Lucy: Oh, alright!

Short scene with Lucy passing out 2 'muscle candies' to Erza, Levy, and Juvia.

Page 3:
This is basically a sequence with Erza, Lucy, Levy, and Juvia getting bigger (height-wise and muscle-wise), though are more used to the growth and are now enjoying it.

Last scene on this page is Gajeel, smiling like the awesome guy he is.
Gajeel: Freakin' sweet. I'm surprised they didn't decide to use this earlier?

Page 4:
Cut to a new location (inside Porylusica's home) with Grey talking to Porylusica. Both are a bit angry at each other in one way or another.
Grey: What do you mean you don't know how to reverse the effects?
Porylusica: There never was a recipe for a reverse spell to the 'muscle candies', since there never was the need for one to begin with.

Cut to close up on Grey
Grey: How could anyone not think to make one? Haven't you been around long enough to study it at least?

Cut to Porylusica
Porylusica: Not as much as you think. These 'muscle candies' never really crossed my mind for a long time, till some of your guild mates asked for help. This just seemed to pop right into mind.

Cut back to Grey and Porylusica in the same panel
Grey: Still, you did have the time to look into it. Why not?
Porylusica: Because they were gifts from the first Fairy Tail Guild Master, Mavis Vermillion.

Hope you like.

[whoknows]

At this rate, the guild will need to have the entire structure of the building remodeled to fit their size!

[whoknows]

Just a heads up, Pokkuti will be currently working on my comic very soon. The last commission on his list will take a few days before he does start on developing the next two chapters of MM.

[Horrorhill99]

Originally Posted by whoknows

Just a heads up, Pokkuti will be currently working on my comic very soon. The last commission on his list will take a few days before he does start on developing the next two chapters of MM.

Heads up! whoknows would like some help in paying for the comic, since he won't always have the money to pay for it all. If you can spare some change, send a message to whoknows and/or me and we'll hear what you have to offer.

[whoknows]

I would be very content if some of the members on this forum can help me out on this current commission. That will definitely help me out in the long run in completing this long run project without having to delay for future commissions. Thanks for listening in. If you want to contribute even a few dollars, you can contact me through PMs. Either through me or through Horrorhill99.