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01-17-2014
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The Demon Of Carnage
Join Date: Feb 2013
Location: The Land Of Beavers and Syrup
Posts: 48
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Re: Under The General's Command (Work in Progress)
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In retrospect, I am immensely unsatisfied with how this snippet turned out. The beginning's fine, but it starts to lose itself towards the end. I'll revise this scene and post the updated version with the next snippet. Last edited by Rubilax; 01-18-2014 at 07:33 PM. Reason: Posting removed |
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