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03-15-2014
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The Man~the Myth~the Bat
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Gotham
Posts: 738
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Re: Inches and Dreams (MiniGTS Short Story)
Robclassact,
Not bad at all for a preset target number of words to hit. I'm more appealed to clothes rippage, but besides not having as much of that the story overall is quite catchy. Especially the way you made most of it a dream, a technique I am using in a different kind of writing side-project of my own.
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