More general 'increased beauty'

[BillPratt]

Originally Posted by Dex164

DO NOT PAY FOR THIS STORY
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/660575/df7c76465a/

It has been available online for free for at least 2 years at various download sites. It has little to no process and is originally part of BEStoryClub. It is NOT WORTH that insane price tag for such an old comic. Hell, it is not even worth it when it's free.

Glad you approve. Yes, it was written about 8 years ago for the BE Story club, ergo glossing over the beauty enhancement material and going light on the mind control. Remote Chaos should be showing up at the BE story Club sometime in the next year or so.

[catfish27]

Originally Posted by BillPratt

Remote Chaos should be showing up at the BE story Club sometime in the next year or so.

I see Part 1 is out. Are you happy with the adaptation of your script?

(I did some proofreading of the script as it existed two years ago, so the comic should be quite relevant to this thread.)

[BillPratt]

Originally Posted by catfish27

I see Part 1 is out. Are you happy with the adaptation of your script?

(I did some proofreading of the script as it existed two years ago, so the comic should be quite relevant to this thread.)

Can't say I've seen it, but I'll keep an eye out.