The Labyrinth Ch. 01 [TF / TG / Cow Woman]

[frice2000]

A bit too much focus on bodily fluids for me to really like the piece. And I think I'd have enjoyed a bit more time being given to the psychological changes but overall this was a nice transformation piece. You crammed in a lot of detail and it really flowed quite well. I think I'd have preferred if you didn't make the victim actually Theseus and had made it someone else, but I don't mind overly that. I do think the newly created minotaur should have felt a bit more animalistic however. Was too controlled for the mythological representations. Shouldn't have had the transforming Theseus feel lust for the guards escorting him to the cell. Should have been a bit more bloodlust and irrational disgust.

Overall a throughly enjoyable story with a few quirks I didn't care for. Certainly deserves a better response from this community.