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05-21-2016
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Diabolical Hugs
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: The pacific north west
Posts: 243
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Re: New Story "Take It All In" by Clovis
I really like the set up, chapter by chapter release, the depth, the shows of character, all of it.
I think you are doing a wonderful job!
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some people are like slinkies; they serve no real purpose in life, but always bring a smile to your face when you push them down a flight of stairs. My avatar is from Godannar. Heres the clip on youtube. Skip to 6:14 for the stuck scene http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uS4NP5Mm4DQ link provided by smegman9 |
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