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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I uploaded the next chapter of Cleavage LLP, but the 'Zon has been slow lately, so it probably won't go live until mid day tomorrow.
In the meantime, The Supermarket Restocked is on sale this week, now is a great time to catch up if you are an issue or two behind.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07RSYTWD5
The first trilogy of the Compatible Extremes series now available in a discounted box set. ![]()
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07S6Z6PH8
April and Marsha are two best friends who are struggling with their weight. They have tried diets and exercise and are determined to lose 60 pounds between the two of them. After joining a gym and meeting a very supportive and remarkable personal trainer, the two discover a secret that allows them to migrate unwanted pounds to one specific area of their body. Suddenly, the struggle to drop weight is no longer their prime concern, but rather the consequences of excessive concentrated growth in their expanding bust lines. This is an erotic tale featuring breast expansion and MF and MFF intercourse. ![]()
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
For those of you who have read About Marlin: Critical Mass you may have noticed that in the scene where Terry talks to Lina at the party right before they go outside there is a continuity issue with their dialogue. I rewrote that part by more or less just adding some filler lines to make it make sense. It doesn't change what happens, but if you can somehow convince your device to let you download the new version, you can read it. I tweaked the cover a little too, if that annoying line goes away at the bottom, you'll know you have the newest version.
No big deal, all I was trying to convey was two people making awkward small talk in a loud room and can barely hear each other... nothing changes as far as what ultimately happens. I make plenty of mistakes, but this one stuck out at me that I somehow missed while... ahem, editing. I'm sure there are other mistakes too. Thank you for reading. This week I am working on a new story about two friends who find themselves with a curious predicament as they strive to lose weight.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Heavy Compensation is now available on Smashwords and soon other ebook retailers.
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/939492
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I just wanted to chime in to say that I am still greatly enjoying "About Marlin".
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Glad to hear it. I especially enjoyed writing this latest chapter
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Amazon is glitching today, but the next chapter of The Futa Surrogate is on the way.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I just saw that Supermarket is up next... get hype!
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
The holiday is really pushing me back, so I don't think I'll be able to release anything this week.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
Bah... I made a lot of errors with that release including a blatant one on the cover. It is fixed now. I also went back and fixed a lot of typos and fleshed out a few of the scenes. Nothing changes story wise, but in particular the last scene with the big reveal becomes more impactful IMO with the extra lines I added, and of course a few new typos to go with it.
Getting a Kindle to update is a PITA. With mine, I might see the new cover initally but still have the old version. With Kindle Unlimited that usually means having to clear pages read and returning the book and then redownloading. For people who bought it, i guess you have to just keep hitting sync update or open a ticket to amazon to get it to send you the new version. You'll know for sure you have it if you see "Lori" or "Vic" under the chapter names in the body of the story (not in the TOC). Sorry. The Futa Surrogate is next.
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Re: The Cleavage Accounts
I wanted to get something out quicker this week to get back on track, but the holiday threw me off schedule and I got sick. I'm working on a sequel to Expanding Opportunity and then I will do another chapter of About Marlin... when I feel better.
Thank you for your support.
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