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Purveyor of Porn
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Gallifrey
Posts: 7,071
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Re: Queen's Artifact
Well, I liked it. Your writing could maybe use a bit more polish, but it certainly isn't bad. Thanks for sharing!
 Y'know, this could make a decent comic script...
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Process Master
Join Date: May 2016
Location: USA
Posts: 608
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Re: Queen's Artifact
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To be fair I was only ever a B student when it came to writing. I still have lots of trouble with grammar, spelling and verb tense. Funny you say comic script. That's because the original idea was for a shrinking Lara Croft commission for Shrink Fan Comics. The basics of the idea are in the story I posted. But the story grew to big for a give away. So I changed it to "New Lara Croft Downsized." I will say thank you again to the nice editor who made "New Lara Croft Downsized" better. qzar9999 I have no problems if you want use it for shrink fan comics. Though I imagine when I finish draft 4 of this story it will be longer. |
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