New artist, looking for critique

Banana_of_Doom · 07-11-2007

I know I'm not much of an artist, but I do see a couple spots that need work.

Her right leg, I know you were trying for perspective, but it just doesn't work out, and looks like her lower leg is really short.

She needs a bit more visible shoulder on the left side.

Her right arm, it's pretty hard to get your arm behind your back like that. =)

Her lower left leg, it's a little too bendy towards the bottom.

Her face is a bit broad, maybe needs a bit more definition on the away cheek.

The hands are done nice, as are the boobehs. Not too bad, just need some more practice, just like me.

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07-11-2007	#5
Banana_of_Doom What? Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: MI, USA Posts: 152	I know I'm not much of an artist, but I do see a couple spots that need work. Her right leg, I know you were trying for perspective, but it just doesn't work out, and looks like her lower leg is really short. She needs a bit more visible shoulder on the left side. Her right arm, it's pretty hard to get your arm behind your back like that. =) Her lower left leg, it's a little too bendy towards the bottom. Her face is a bit broad, maybe needs a bit more definition on the away cheek. The hands are done nice, as are the boobehs. Not too bad, just need some more practice, just like me.