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Robot Gentleman
Join Date: Nov 2008
Posts: 987
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Re: Mega Mocha
And it is finished on a nice even 20.
I hope you enjoyed it all.
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Electric Frankfurter
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Frankfurt, darkest Germany
Posts: 1,835
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Re: Mega Mocha
Awwwwwwwww...
Its over allready... But it was a nice enging... I hope that you will continue it one day. |
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01-01-2009
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Process Fan
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: US. Trapped here.
Posts: 98
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Re: Mega Mocha
Joeman you are da man! An excellent story with an excellent ending!
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01-01-2009
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Banned
Join Date: Sep 2008
Posts: 1,313
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Re: Mega Mocha
Way to go, God. You kinda fudged yourself over wi--
Wait, what kind of coffee does GOD drink? >_> Anyway, excellent ending. I laughed a bit. 
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01-01-2009
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Re: Mega Mocha
I think the implication is that God intended it that way. It's no coincidence there's a cup on His desk.
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Greenskin Imp
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: WHERE AM I?!
Posts: 837
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Re: Mega Mocha
Quote:
All in all I am pretty sure He has this particular universe on record and is sitting back in an easy chair elsewhere. The Almighty has to get his entertainment from somewhere after all.
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01-01-2009
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Tieing a Knot Or two
Join Date: Jan 2006
Location: Breaking Down The Walls Of Your Imagination.
Posts: 19,674
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Re: Mega Mocha
I love how you end it with her thinking about getting even bigger. She still has plenty of room to grow(God's desk looks quite large compared to her).
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01-02-2009
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Oops...she did it again.
Join Date: Feb 2007
Location: That little place in your head you don't know about.
Posts: 1,355
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Re: Mega Mocha
Frankly one more cup of Mega Mocha wouldn't cause that much ruckess. After all, this is God we're talking about.
Awesome ending nonetheless. |
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01-02-2009
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Frequent Poster
Join Date: Jul 2006
Posts: 323
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Re: Mega Mocha
great ending Joeman, can't wait for your next one!
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01-02-2009
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Mostly gone
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Philadelphia, PA
Posts: 2,122
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Re: Mega Mocha
I was definitely not expecting that ending. Nice work (and nice ending).
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01-02-2009
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Frequent Poster
Join Date: Jun 2008
Posts: 138
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Re: Mega Mocha
Great sequence! I wish you would ink so it would be a little clearer, but aside from that, stellar work!
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