New DA artist

[spongebathe83]

Originally Posted by Kojiro Highwind

standard cus i was comparing the thickness of the lines with the lines on the paper ^_^ if it was college ruled then the lines would be thicker ^_^

no im not an evil genuis nya

an eye for detail. kudos

[Kojiro Highwind]

^_^ thank you nya

[Kyril]

Originally Posted by Kojiro Highwind

no im not an evil genuis nya

That's exactly what an evil genuis would say... provided said evil genuis was not insane/demented...

In regards to the pics, they're pretty good for preliminary sketches. Hopefully they won't hold a candle to the finished designs.

[ProfessorMishap]

You style kinda scares me, and its alittle rough handed.

Some tips are to sketch out your drawings with skeleton (lines and circles) and draw from there. I also notice you have an unsteady hand, this'll make your drawing that much harder. Take it from me and those who know my work, and I bet many would agree.

[Kojiro Highwind]

Originally Posted by Kyril

That's exactly what an evil genuis would say... provided said evil genuis was not insane/demented...

::uh huh... uh huh... ok then:.

the voices say you know too much but your not a threat so you can live then the day comes nya

[spongebathe83]

Any critique is excepted.

These are the drawings I've retouched with Photoshop.
BTW, ANY photoshop tips, hints, walkthroughs, etc. would be gladly excepted.

[spongebathe83]

What is this forum's stance on multiple breasts anyways? With the exception of the manga scan's they're seldom found.

[Sutibaru]

Originally Posted by spongebathe83

What is this forum's stance on multiple breasts anyways? With the exception of the manga scan's they're seldom found.

I think it is accepted quite well.

BTW, I like the bottle one the most.

[spongebathe83]

Originally Posted by Sutibaru

I think it is accepted quite well.

BTW, I like the bottle one the most.

Thnx! & its from one of the most prominent users in this forum.
I've been posting stuff like crazy on the DA since I've recently came into a lot of free time.

[Bugmaker_shrinker]

Could you try doing something different with the eyes?
It's not like I hate them, but it's more like I'm watching ghosts or insects.
The rest of your drawings is quite good!

[spongebathe83]

Originally Posted by Bugmaker_shrinker

Could you try doing something different with the eyes?
It's not like I hate them, but it's more like I'm watching ghosts or insects.
The rest of your drawings is quite good!

The eyes are like that to re-iterate the fact that she is an artificial creation. You never see expressionate eyes on clay/rock/lead/iron golems from a D&D gamebook or any other fantasy game. Golems don't have expressionate eyes.

Any questions, comments, suggestions, tips are welcome.

[Sutibaru]

Originally Posted by spongebathe83

The eyes are like that to re-iterate the fact that she is an artificial creation. You never see expressionate eyes on clay/rock/lead/iron golems from a D&D gamebook or any other fantasy game. Golems don't have expressionate eyes.

Any questions, comments, suggestions, tips are welcome.

If it is expressionless you are going for, you can try drawing the eye normally but the pupil will be without the iris. I would rather you have a pupil, but it is up to you. Also there will be a lack of shine. Give a lighter color than just black for the pupil and a lighter color for what should be the white of the eye, and you should be a bit better. She still will be emotionless, but also stay consistant with what you are going for.

BTW, she isn't a golem is she?