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#25 |
Would-be Bard
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Canada
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Permit me, please, to correct the English version a little.
Bitte, erlauben Sie mir, die ?bersetzung ein bi?chen verbessern. EDIT: whoops, missed an "s" in "meowS and mews", and changed "finished her pee" to "continued her pee" because "finished" had already been used in the sentence. Also, changed "went to cleaning herself" to the more proper "went ABOUT cleaning herself," and changed "While she did the, her" to "While she did THIS, her", and deleted the "a" in "it felt a kinda itchy." 2007 Katie found an adorable alley cat. When she went to pet it, it bit her hand. That afternoon, when she was going on a walk with her mom, her speech became peppered with interjected meows and mews. Upon arrival at the park, Katie made straight for the sandbox where, to her mother's horror, she pulled down her skirt and emptied her bladder, not minding that everyone was staring at her. When her mother came over and told her to come home right away, she hissed and resisted. After dragging her home, Katie's mother helped her out of the wet pants - Katie hadn't finished doing her business, and had continued her pee on the way home. "Katie… Katie, for heaven’s sake, take a shower! Then go to bed. I need a drink," her mom said. Once the door closed, Katie went about cleaning herself. She lifted a leg, bent over and began to lick around her vagina. While she did this, her whiskers sprouted; it felt kinda itchy. Her ears, pointier than before, flicked toward the window: something was squeaking outside. Before she could investigate, however, a call came up from downstairs, "Katie, come down, dinner!" She scrambled for her clothes and bounded down the stairs. She didn’t end up eating much of the vegetable stew that was served; it smelled awful. However, the bowl of ice cream afterwards tasted heavenly. Having licked her hands, she piped, "Good night - murr - meww - Mom!" She got into bed, wearing only her socks, like always. Then she heard the sound of something squeaking outside again. She leapt to the window. With fuzzy hands and long fingernails she lifted the old frame and sat down on the ledge. The wind felt nice and cool in her new brown fur. Now she saw the cause of those sounds. Mice - delicious, delicious mice - were scrounging around the garbage beside her house. Without a second thought, she jumped down between the trash cans and sank her sharp teeth into the neck of one of the mice. Warm, delicious blood flowed into her mouth; she licked her lips with her rough, barbed tongue. It was an awesome feeling, to hunt like an animal! As she revelled in her freedom, her vagina filled with a secretion. She caught a whiff of it and cried out in a long yowl - there was a fire in her womb, and only a tomcat could quench it. She rose onto all fours and lifted her tail, half to get her balance, half to show off her glistening netherlips, and let out another cry. Her parents grumble about the caterwauling. They can’t understand that she cries for sex; they only hear only a cat in heat... Last edited by Seadog Driftwood; 09-14-2007 at 03:04 PM. |
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#26 |
Process Disciple
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 1,144
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your work rocks Cap!
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#27 |
Lurker
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Germany
Posts: 25
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A big "Thank You" to Seadog Driftwood =)
Hi, Seadog Driftwood,
help is everytime welcome. Thanks alot. =) I will use your version oft the text in FA. Greetings from germany, Cap |
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#28 |
Lurker
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Germany
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Danke ivan11422. I try my best. =)
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#29 |
Would-be Bard
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Canada
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