BE Avenger

[ryohji]

Page 9 and 10. Check the front page and let me know if I made mistakes.

[Vengeance1701]

Haven't had a chance to fully read but I appreciate the direction of your comic.

How long do you intend on this being? What is the length of the process she'll undergo?

I just ask b/c I hope you don't go for the traditional online comic route of taking ten years to get to anything good

[ryohji]

Well the main character will grow for the next chapter, just wait.

[Geocat]

Keeps getting better and better!

[SoylentOrange]

Oh man, page 10 is awesome! I love how she's so casual about her size and ability.

[ryohji]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

Oh man, page 10 is awesome! I love how she's so casual about her size and ability.

That is one of the main points of this comic: How to put BE in the every day life, and how could it be useful.

[Existimatio]

Originally Posted by ryohji

2 more pages. I hopes there is not much grammatical mistakes as the others.
Five more pages and the first chapter will be close, the second chapter will be there soon after I finish this one.

Thanks for the proposition, Existimatio, but I shall ink those pages myself... as soon as I've got time. But I appreciate your offer.

no problem ryohji. im trying to draw a comic anyway

Originally Posted by Existimatio

no problem ryohji. im trying to draw a comic anyway

Then shut the hell up, and get back to work.

[Existimatio]

Originally Posted by shadow

Then shut the hell up, and get back to work.

lol...dont worry. im almost done the first page

[ryohji]

Originally Posted by Existimatio

lol...dont worry. im almost done the first page

I'm glad that nobody is messing with me like thi... Hold on a second, is that a shotgun you're pointing at me?

[Existimatio]

Originally Posted by ryohji

I'm glad that nobody is messing with me like thi... Hold on a second, is that a shotgun you're pointing at me?

*looks around*...bang! bang! bang! Heh...good one ryohji.

[BaconExpert]

Milk bath.

Freaking genius.