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Cool looks waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better in color, though wish that the good gal got the bigger boobs and all!

[SoylentOrange]

Originally Posted by Tombman13

Cool looks waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better in color, though wish that the good gal got the bigger boobs and all!

I have no doubt she will by the time Skiff sees this thing through. This is only the first chapter, remember...

[Skiff]

Well I?m back from my vacation. Not that I was really on vacation, just elsewhere.

Fake_name, I saw your request before I left and I thought about it? I don?t want to sound like a jerk but I?m going to have to say ?no? to emailing the original files, and for a few reasons? First, they don?t translate to any other program other than Paint Shop Pro 5 and up. Other programs like adobe and that I?m almost sure won?t recognize them. Second I don?t really want my email address circulating out there? I know I could start a dummy email, but still. Three, if I start emailing my stuff to one person then others will fallow. Last, I also didn?t want the original files circulating around either. It makes it too easy to modify my work and slap someone else?s name on them. It?s different with the Black & White sketches I posted. Because you?re starting from scratch and building on to the drawing like I did, but the final result will be different.

This brings up another point, reposting my work if it is modified. (This goes for everyone) I ?did? say anyone could color the pages differently from the sketches if they didn?t like my coloring. However again I?d like to say, please don?t post my work elsewhere unless I give permission. Don?t post my modified work elsewhere unless I give permission. Don?t change the story and post the comic again in the process Forum. If you want to post differently colored versions of the comic here, could you start another thread for ?alternate coloring? either in the general section or in the Breast Expansion category rather then posting it here. (If anybody already posted any of my stuff elsewhere on any other forum, website, or whatever. Please go and remove them and instead direct them to the main http://process.gtsdepot.net site.) I don?t think Lorekeep wants direct links to the forum posts anyway. So don?t.

Now that that?s out of the way?

I?m going to start work shortly on part 2 of my comic. So, when I do I?m going to remove the individual image posts I made earlier. (First Sketches, Final Sketches and Colored Images.) and ?Zip? them and post them as ?archived? when I post the first new sketches. Saves on space. I?m probably going to give the ?Hi Quality? Pages to Lorekeep sometime too. Donation gift and such. I?m not looking for any money out of it. I just want to keep the site going so I?ll have a place to post new stuff.

(P.S. The cheese cake is just getting removed? so might as well ?save picture as? now. And I?ll leave the tutorial images for now. Again, no distributing images! Even if they are no longer available here. ? Think of it as ?a collector?s item?.

[Denada]

Starting to get really curious on if the now bigger breasted lass will get to change the girls to fit her musings on what to do with them.Either way,looking forward to your continued work Skiff.

[SoylentOrange]

Good to hear from you again, Skiff. Can't wait to see how Part 2 comes out.

[Fake_Name]

That's alright, i can understand that. I would like to say that i am very discreet, but in any case, no problem.

I am fairly sure that photoshop can open just about anything, but i have never tried PSP5 files.

I cant draw worth a damn, but i can do things like coloring and image manipulation quite well.

[Skiff]

I learned something about *.gif files... They don't compress at all as *.Zip files... Oh well...

I got 4 new pages done for part 2. The first 2 pages are in sequence. the other to are yet to be placed. The last one is going to be near to the end. I'll let your imaginations fill the gap in events for now. Untill I finish drawing the pages in between.

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yaay more skiff art!!! the new comics are thoroughly enjoyed, thank you very much. ^_^

Awesome ^^ you could probaly make a comic book by now!

[AnimeGuy2005]

Originally Posted by Tombman13

Awesome ^^ you could probaly make a comic book by now!

Agreed.

[SoylentOrange]

Awesome, first peek at chapter 2. Lesse...


First page seems to be wasting a bunch of space in the lower left corner, which tends to draw the eye (Though this will be less of a problem once the color is added.) Also, panel 3 could use some lines indicating the wing's atrophy or just something to let the reader know she's sucking them back into her body or whatever she's doing. Also, both instances of "then" in panel 5 should be "than". Good flow and layout otherwise, though- the L-shaped panel 4 is a nice touch, the way it psychically leads into and frames panel 5.

Page two is also really well done, with just a few nitpicks. In panel one, "Little fuzzy shits" implies that their poops are themselves fuzzy. "fuzzy little shits" on the other hand, establishes the adjectives of them being fuzzy little things and *then* calls them shits. The break-line gutter between panels 1&2 and panels 3-5 is spot-on, but the gutter boxig panel 4 in all by itself seems extraneous. The way the word bubbles point to each other is enough of an eye-line that you could probably increas panel 4's size until it was flush with panels 3 and 5 without any negative consequences. Nothing else on page 2 ecxept to say that it's a good introduction and I feel for the poor girl. Oh, actually, that reminds me: I assume from the fourth page that she's soon to be that fuzzy-looking girl cowering from Joanna's breasts eventually, but with four women they're starting to kind of all look the same. The face-stripes are good, but consider a less spikey hairstyle on the vet in order to make her visually distinct, even if she's only going to be in her current state a page or two. (Of course, this is another aspect that color will make largely irrelevent, but it's worth mentioning nonetheless...)

Page 3 and 4 aren't chrononlogical, which takes out a big chunk of the critique, but I'll do my best anyways.

Page 3 has a lot of critiques that can/will probably be solved by their completion. For starters, Joanna and Katt need to be coming around a corner or through a door or something between panels one and two, because since the guards in panel 3 are apparently facing their direction already, there needs to be something environmentally that made them just "pop" out like that, because even if somehow they missed seeing two naked voloptuous women walking down the hall, they would at least have heard them! Oh, and the extra-wide gutters around panel 3 are a good way of isolating the focus on the two guards. You could probably chop the panels even more to enhance the effect. And last but not least, Katt's breast apparently grow between panels four and five. Since everything else (Like the guard) seems to be the same size, either Katt's growing or it's just a little needed perspective correction. Other than that, great page.

Page 4 has a nice POV shot, but the anatomy doesn't quite work. If her breasts are totally pressed together in panel 2, then the perspective in panel 1 is showing too much of a gap at that level compared to panel 4. If you raised panel 1's "Camera" so to speak, moved the nipples down a little on the breasts, and lowered the rabbit(?) woman to, say, starting just under her breasts, the perspective would probably work better. Also, Joanna's right breast (Her right) in panel 4 seems oddly shaped. The big crease on the side has nothing pushing it in to make that crease, so it seems. And lastly, shouldn't it be "Wobble"? (Unless you were making a play on "Waddle"...)

Anyways, great stuff and I can't wait to see more. You seriously need a website. Hell, you could try for WLP or something. Lord knows you keep a better schedule than most of those guys...

[Fake_Name]

Excellent, thank you!

Originally Posted by Skiff

I learned something about *.gif files... They don't compress at all as *.Zip files... Oh well...

That would be because .gif files are already internally compressed with a similar compression scheme as .zip files. Therefore, they are reduced to a state that is as informationally dense as possible without removing any information.

Heh, if nothing else, i can contribute my computernerd-ism.