New TF Story

[SoylentOrange]

Slight delay on the next bit- after seeing Hmm!'s insanely sexy Juggalos piece here:

http://spiralingstaircase.deviantart...rixie-79290748

I was inspired to write a short Juggalos story of my own. Once I get that out of my system, though, it's right back to Mary, Katie, and Anne!

[SexyJin]

yay! Back in action!

[geneticks]

Nice. We can sense the heavy stuff coming...

[SoylentOrange]

I apologize again for the delay. Stupid Hmm! and his stupid great art.

After seeing his "Maddi's Induction" pic I couldn't get the girl out of my head, and now Hmm! and I are working on an Illustrated Juggalos story featuring the girl as a reluctant waitress. Here's a sketch of some of the action- Maddi's a bit sour on her job so the manager slipped her a bit of "Tickle Tonic"- can't have a pouty face for the guests when the slightest touch of a cold plate sets you to giggling!

Again, I apologize- I've tried to work on the story, but Maddie just keeps forcing herself into my brain, squeezing into all the tiny cracks of my free thoughts, which is no small feat considering her girth!

[walter_sullivan]

idea for victim of TF.
one of the cops that come to arrest mary under suspicion of kidnapping or murder.
someone who's had several years on the force, knows all the laws and means to take down people.
in order to keep from eating him/her, mary decides to turn them
i suppose the TF would make them into a soldier. something to defend the Body, Flesh, and Mind when needed. i imagine a mix between full body armor and tentacles.
maybe a bit of a mental TF to protect the Trifecta as much as much as they worked for the force.
i'm sure once the police get captured though, things will start spiraling out of control.
also, maybe without mary knowing it, the Body slowly starts putting small faint suggestions. sort of slowly twisting mary's will to that of the Body. not that she'll want to eat people, i doubt the Body would risk her noticing her mental changes with such a big leap, but make her like the idea of changing others. more willing, maybe even eager.
i just love mental TF along with Physical really.
something to think about.

[SoylentOrange]

Originally Posted by walter_sullivan

sort of slowly twisting mary's will to that of the Body. not that she'll want to eat people, i doubt the Body would risk her noticing her mental changes with such a big leap, but make her like the idea of changing others. more willing, maybe even eager.
i just love mental TF along with Physical really.
something to think about.

I was with you up to here, but I hate, *HATE* mental transformations. It's about as offensive to me as rape. Although I think the idea of a bodyguard is neat- Mary is resisting the whole "Hive queen" thing, but I suppose leeting one or two slip by might be a neat idea...

[walter_sullivan]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

I was with you up to here, but I hate, *HATE* mental transformations. It's about as offensive to me as rape. Although I think the idea of a bodyguard is neat- Mary is resisting the whole "Hive queen" thing, but I suppose leeting one or two slip by might be a neat idea...

oh come on now, comparing it to rape is a little extreme don't you think?
besides, she wants it (if you do it right) and wanting it is the difference between rape and not rape.
bah. not a good argument. forget it. at least i tried.

[SkruLuce]

Originally Posted by walter_sullivan

oh come on now, comparing it to rape is a little extreme don't you think?
besides, she wants it (if you do it right) and wanting it is the difference between rape and not rape.
bah. not a good argument. forget it. at least i tried.

Making her want it through mental changes is the exact same thing as rape. In fact, in some rape cases the woman, though she hates what is happening to her, still gets aroused from the sensations and may 'want it' near the end, though afterward she'll come back to her senses. So, no, wanting it is not the difference between rape and consensual sex. Agreeing to it before hand (hence, 'consensual') with a clear, sober mind is not rape. Agreeing while in an altered state is rape.

[walter_sullivan]

Originally Posted by SkruLuce

Making her want it through mental changes is the exact same thing as rape. In fact, in some rape cases the woman, though she hates what is happening to her, still gets aroused from the sensations and may 'want it' near the end, though afterward she'll come back to her senses. So, no, wanting it is not the difference between rape and consensual sex. Agreeing to it before hand (hence, 'consensual') with a clear, sober mind is not rape. Agreeing while in an altered state is rape.

yeah, that's why i said "not a good argument." that my point wasn't good.
well, if we get really technical about it, a physical transformation could be considered rape as well.

Hah ha!! You're back. Hooray!!

[SoylentOrange]

Yep!

Sick as a dog, though...

[geneticks]

This thread shall not be forgotten...
So any news on the progress of the story Soylent ? Or did you abandon it ?
I'm eager to read more. Who else is ?