Dungeon & Dragons & Expansion (BE, TF, MB, FMG)

[Permafrost]

Originally Posted by SoylentOrange

Well, again, Celia's TF is supposed to be a little gross, that was kind of her point, to be the bottom of the well in both mental and physical horror. Though I have to admit I find it funny that you single out Jillian's mind control when Rena had- in my opinion- the far scarier and more drastic mental changes.

And how do you mean with the outfits? I thought they were rather plain, myself...

They are fairly plain, I just have a fondness for adventurer attire and such, I dunno, it is part of the setting I like!

Also, Rena's mental change was far more drastic, but there wasn't really awareness of it, or a response to it on her part. She didn't have a moment of realization really. I liked Jillian's bit about "Oh, what a mess" and "I'm sure I could think straight if I wasn't so hungry." It illustrates maybe an awareness of her change. Or stuff like her yelling at Celia to do stuff indicates sort of that she's till *her*, she's just changed.

I dunno, it was just something that I liked! I am not big on the goo stuff either, so on the other side, that scene was a mixed bag for my personal tastes, but it was well done either way.

You do very well, and are certainly head and heels over a lot of folks who try their hand at this. So I guess that is encouragement.

On a side note, I played a Transformation/MC themed D&D game not too long ago with some people over at the Garden. It didn't last very long (scheduling and such was hard) but it was a blast, and this reminded me of that.

[dposer]

Beautiful story man, i hope you write more

[Lonebeatle]

Well of course it's one of the most extreme TFs I've read, but you did it fine and well wtitten; I got kinda sad for her though, even with the seemingly 'happy' ending, two gals had it really rough from then on. (Slime girl & dryder vs mid-ogre & BE girl)

[SoylentOrange]

Update! Been real busy season, but now we're finally getting back into the colored pics. Enjoy Copperpot in all her expanded glory!

Edit: Update 2! Tweaked the colors a bit, I'm pretty sure this is final!