Welcome to Juggalos [BE/Butt/hips Expansion]

[SoylentOrange]

Heh. There's nothing special about Angie's birth control not working, it just happens sometimes. My mom was on the pill when I came along. ^^;

[vidgamer85]

I like this one so far. Pretty much for the reasons that you're pointing out. Slowly but surely you're sneaking in more and more instances of Maddi not being bothered by the expansion, and at the same time continuing to push her buttons by introducing more and more 'bizarre' events for her to deal with.

Seriously dude, all your works. Much as I like my fap-fiction, this is just plain a fun, enjoyable read as just a story.
I'm sorry I don't have much in terms of constructive criticism, I've never been able to do that for anything good honestly, just hits a point of quality that I can't really think of anything to say.

[satistaspawn]

I didn't read through everybody else's comments so let me just say sorry if I made you worry, no your pages are not on the BESC I was just looking for a strong comparison point to elaborate on how high the quality of your work is. I also pick up on how even though the situations your characters are put in are far from realistic, at least this point in time (here's hoping ), the personalities of each character seems to be very real I can't think of any other author in the community who can pull that off. Seeing how long it is taking Maddi to feel comfortable in a world so far out of her comfort zone, and that she doesn't even seem to notice how much she's changed from the start, really seems like how any real person would do it. Maddi is also no longer thinking of her coworkers as the perverted sluts she originally though they were, especially in the latest chapter how she is worried about Angie and thinking more about what her life is like outside the restaurant. Up until now I think Maddi has just thought about these girls being the way she sees them on the job only now realizing they aren't that horribly different from her.

[SoylentOrange]

Same as with chapter 14, note me for the long version, but otherwies here's the latest and greatest in Working Girl stuff: http://fav.me/d6e56lt

[keybladeknight]

great job Soy the story was perfect and about time there was lactation in it. lol i hope we get to see Angie's daughter with the fox ears and tail like her mother gets after taking the pill

[hunter87]

The lactation matter seems to fit with the story as it was put in. The previous chapter pretty directly alluded to it happening due to the fact that her boobs were not only constantly growing but they seemed to be heavier then normal per maddies observations. Also given the explanation for the reaction (Pregnancy hormones reacting to pills) it doesn't seem like a far leap either.

I think it also helps build on the whole maddie getting used to working at juggalos and actually establishing connections with coworkers. Its one thing for Maddie to babysit angie if she's just swelled up, its quite different character wise though for her to do that and help with some of the leaky side effects as well. Sheila's comments on Maddie not making a peep about things being bawdry also would lose a good bit of effect without that interaction having taken place.

That being said I really enjoyed maddie's comment on riley being a twat, it just seemed so damned perfect for her.

I am curious though if this is the last we'll see of angie for a while. I was half expecting maddie to end up spending the night all the way through with angie. Makes more questions pop in my head as to how her situation will resolve? Will she simply deflate and shrink down or is she going to end up like a water balloon with a leak in it (Trixie did state it wouldn't be pretty lol)

Bwarg gonna cut my post short, got way too many questions that I dont want to completely unload on ya lol.

[satistaspawn]

I have no problems with lactation and as hunter said it fit perfectly into the story, both in why it was happening and with Maddi starting to feel more comfortable with her job. It was nice to see Maddi finally open up to someone other than Sheila even if she was just trying to drown out the sound of the dripping milk, and that she started talking with Angie for that reason also has a realistic effect to it.

[oxdaman]

Huh, feels weird reading this again after so long (even though I just reread the first two chapters recently).

It seems like Maddi's really getting used to working at Juggalos. She barely paid attention to her growth in the locker room, chatting away with Sheila like a couple of high school girls after gym. What made me laugh was her run-in with Riley. I felt like I was watching a clash of the titans similar to the scenes of Eyeshield 21 (at football anime where a single clash between a running back and a linebacker would seem to last about 5 minutes or so. Basically, way longer than what it actually was). Even their looks got me pumped. Like the close up to the eyes of a character. Maddi: Don't you dare. Riley: Watch me. Awesome!

What a surprise from Angie though. She was such a side character that I'd almost forgotten her. Had no idea that she'd get her own couple of chapters. But pregnant?! Did NOT see that coming. It really is hard for me to imagine a picture in my head though. I wasn't able to clearly picture Angie's size until that part that mentioned that her breasts were the same size as Sheila's. This is a because I have a problem painting a mental image. The description was great.
I have to agree with Maddi though. WHAT exactly is in that gigantic belly?! Not to mention that I have to feel sorry for Angie. Didn't even have time to mentally prepare herself for this.

Oh, and though I don't usually say things like this, I felt that the part where Maddi was trying to figure out how to bring the chairs to the lobby was unnecessary. I mean you have a woman expanding in an even weirder way than normal and you're over here messing with chairs for an hour. Why? Why not make a couple of trips to and from the Gold Room to get chairs? Idk, maybe that was there to show how she's getting used to her Juggalos bulk, but it just seemed unnecessary to me.

Great first half. Wondering what I'll find in the second!!

[oxdaman]

WOOT! Finally caught up with Working Girl!

To start, the lactation fit in perfectly with the whole pregnant thing. It fit in so well with the story that I couldn't imagine how it would work without it. Plus, it wasn't exaggerated lactation, just a small leakage. I mean, it works with the whole pregnancy thing done Juggalos style: first belly becomes 27 months huge, then hormones cause the breasts to fill to gargantuan sizes with milk, and next comes lactation. And honestly, having to make a trip to the kitchen to empty a lobster pot full of milk was a lot more interesting than going back and forth for food again. Not to mention that her encounter with Riley would've gone as smoothly otherwise.

And now for Riley. Even though just about everyone on the staff says that Riley's a jerk, I'm just not seeing it. There has been nothing in the story so far that shows that she's an outright jerk. Rough and tomboyish, yes, but a jerk? I'm not seeing it. Every reason she's had for being mean was with just cause. First strike, Maddi rams into her, making a mess and costing Riley her tip. Second strike, Maddi's mishap with the ice which Riley had to clean up, which now that I think about it was probably quite difficult considering her size. Third strike, Riley had to take over both Angie and Maddi's duties during the whole pregnancy issue. All three instances were connected to Maddi, so I can understand Riley's initial thoughts being, "I have to clean up the English chicks mess AGAIN?! WTF?!"

Call it a coincidence, but I experienced something similar before as a kid, though I was in Maddi's position. It was during the summer I spent at my Dad's house in Florida with several other kids (not all his mind you. More like cousins). One day when we were in the pool, I accidentally wondered onto the deep end of the pool (which was a sudden drop). I couldn't swim at the time, and grabbed the closest thing to me for support- a girl wearing a life vest. Because of that act, it seems that I was dunking the girl or something. For the rest of the summer the girl always had an attitude with me. A couple of years later I learned that it was because I almost caused her to drown that time. Point is, I understand Riley's reasoning.

Another point I noticed was the conversation Maddi had with Angie about working at Juggalos. What was plainly written out was that working at Juggalos has brought Sheila and Maddi a lot closer together in more ways than one. Everything happens for a reason right? (Coincidentally, the same instance happened to me which involved my laptop getting stolen in Haiti, me going back to the US for a replacement and then finding out that I had kidney stones.) It also brings up the question, "would Maddi quit if she was given the chance?"

The other point that was mentioned that I can take further is Angie's reason for working at Juggalos, which came be summed up in two words: it's fun. More specifically, it's fun because she gets to chance to show off a lot of feminine sex appeal that she usually doesn't have. In Maddi's case, she has, from what was mentioned, a very fine body when she's normal. Also, because of her English woman pride (I think), she's not to big on the whole flashy, curvaceous- well, you get the idea. But then you have Angie, who normally has even less sex appeal than Maddi and likes the concept of being jiggly. It's not like Maddi's ever been mistaken for a boy after all.

This point brings me back to Riley, again. I really laughed when the chef talked about how Riley's probably the most popular waitress in Juggalos-and she doesn't even know it! Too funny. But still, my point is that Riley's probably in a similar mindset as Angie. Not because she's physically lacking in sex appeal, but mentally (after all, she is the tomboy of the lot). Having humongous T&A pretty much works in favor of her natural dominatrix nature. Still, I could be wrong about all this, I'm just making assumptions. Still, it's pretty obvious that Riley enjoys her job.

Wow, that was a lot, last thing is that, slowly but surely, Maddi is getting more used to working at Juggalos. At this point, I'm imaging an episode with Penelope so that Maddi can learn about having fun with the proportions when working at Juggalos and Riley, oh man Riley. At this point I'm just really wondering what beneath all the rumors. I've broken it down to what I think is the reason behind Riley's actions, but that's just like trying to figure out women in general- there is no way to do that! Can't wait for the next one!

[Tindalos60]

Just got caught up and thought I'd throw in my 2 cents.

First, it was interesting seeing that the pills can have some side effects which was something I'd been wondering about. I don't think I've ever heard of a drug one takes that doesn't have some kind of side effects in at least a small portion of people, so it's good seeing that angle get fleshed out. Of course now there's the damnable mystery of what it might do to the baby since Trixie dropped tons of hints but the only definite things we got were 'born early, looks late, will definitely be a girl'. That's going to bug the hell out of me wondering about it until it gets revealed... of course I wonder if the owner's ex might be involved in that somehow.

It's also good to see Maddi starting to connect with some of her coworkers. It's a big step and a shift in attitude she didn't really notice until someone pointed it out to her.

[hmmm!]

Looks like this thread's got a little pulse of life again. So here's the picture to chapter thirteen that I never posted here back when I did it, for those who haven't seen it.

[jsands]

Just found the last chapters that are awaiting hmmm!/SpiralingStaircase's illustrations.

given these last few chapters, I'm calling that when Maddi's debt is finaly paid off, she stays on afterward.