I think I'm in Love - Page 4

blarxy12 · 12-28-2008

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Originally Posted by Muhznit

My glasses cracked viewing that. Seriously. I think the artist either put no effort into it, or is just spiting the BE community. I'm liking the concept. Seriously, BE with a side of extreme horniness, and dissapearing clothing is pretty hot to me, but really... the drawing style killed it. Not even the text could save it. Even Shine-of-Rain did better.

NO DRAWING EFFORT
NO LITERARY EFFORT
MENTAL OUTPUT OF A HORNY TEENAGER ONLY
FINAL DESTINATION.

you know... if someone else improved the art of it or the artist put more effort in it, or atleast get a scanner (I'm guessing he dosent) but you're rite, though that is great idea, bad art... well I wonder what'd happen if that artist met an artist that has bad ideas and good art?

Gobosan1 · 12-28-2008

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Originally Posted by blarxy12

you know... if someone else improved the art of it or the artist put more effort in it, or atleast get a scanner (I'm guessing he dosent) but you're rite, though that is great idea, bad art... well I wonder what'd happen if that artist met an artist that has bad ideas and good art?

i want to put a request in for this, but at the same time i don't feel like getting flamed YET AGAIN on a different thread
kupo

Hooded_Miracle · 12-28-2008

http://theblackmarket.deviantart.com...PEARS-41967927

That was done in MS Paint.

Along with a few other items in his gallery.

The thing about writing and drawing? You will ALWAYS suck at first, and will be told so accordingly. Work on it until you're awesome.

I mean, geez, I look at my first couple of writing's (Nightmare Before Christmas fanfiction? What the fuck?) and literally have to shake my head. I was terrible. Not the worst, but terrible.

I will admit he put effort into it. So did I. I just put more effort into my work over time.

Which is why my newest chapter I'm working on is over 7 pages long. That's long for me, but not NEARLY as long as the writing I've seen in other places.

Baby steps. Admittedly, the first baby steps will be full of verbal beatings, but a little at a time, right?

Gobosan1 · 12-28-2008

that was just creepy
even by my standards
kupo

blarxy12 · 12-28-2008

Well I hope the artist or another artist improves that comic.. I wonder what it'd turn out like...

Gobosan1 · 12-28-2008

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ProfessorMishap · 12-29-2008

Ahh memories. I remember when my sucky art graced this forum. >:3 Look how it turned out now bitches! Haha! Tough love works!

12-28-2008	#3
Hooded_Miracle Banned Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 1,313	Re: I think I'm in Love http://theblackmarket.deviantart.com...PEARS-41967927 That was done in MS Paint. Along with a few other items in his gallery. The thing about writing and drawing? You will ALWAYS suck at first, and will be told so accordingly. Work on it until you're awesome. I mean, geez, I look at my first couple of writing's (Nightmare Before Christmas fanfiction? What the fuck?) and literally have to shake my head. I was terrible. Not the worst, but terrible. I will admit he put effort into it. So did I. I just put more effort into my work over time. Which is why my newest chapter I'm working on is over 7 pages long. That's long for me, but not NEARLY as long as the writing I've seen in other places. Baby steps. Admittedly, the first baby steps will be full of verbal beatings, but a little at a time, right?

12-28-2008	#4
Gobosan1 Squirrel! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Nope Posts: 9,649	Re: I think I'm in Love that was just creepy even by my standards kupo

12-28-2008	#5
blarxy12 Blaaarrgh Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Canada Posts: 71	Re: I think I'm in Love Well I hope the artist or another artist improves that comic.. I wonder what it'd turn out like... __________________ poke me and I'll bite your arm off

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Gobosan1 Squirrel! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Nope Posts: 9,649	Re: I think I'm in Love blank Last edited by Gobosan1; 09-21-2010 at 07:21 PM.

12-29-2008	#7
ProfessorMishap Oh dear, not again! Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: I'm standing right behind you!! Posts: 2,158	Re: I think I'm in Love Ahh memories. I remember when my sucky art graced this forum. >:3 Look how it turned out now bitches! Haha! Tough love works! Last edited by ProfessorMishap; 12-29-2008 at 12:14 AM.