The Show Must Go On

Alchemical Night · 09-12-2009

Hi There,

I downloaded the clip a little while ago and watched it through. It is a good, very well composed and effective TG work.

The transformation was a classic and well handeld. The change of his crotch, the swelling of his rear, breast expansion, hair growth and the final morph were all interesting and effective, though there is some room to improve things.

Thinking things over, I thought that perhaps the crotch change might have been more pronounced or used more organic sounds to emphasise the change; though the idea was a brilliant starter and well done. Breast expansion was well handeld, though perhaps other organic sounds could be used beyond the more liquid noises heard. The hair growth was good too and quite well done. The final morph was a little awkward, but such processes can be improved too as well.

Also, I did like her commenting on her change, feeling the change in her clothes and kicking her shoes off as she knew they were much too big; a nice, classic theme in much TG fiction which was well done too. The examination was effective and did highlight the idea of the male trying to adapt to his (her) new body. In all, the clips was a good, effective work which does indicate a rich creative potential from Taylor and her associates.

Thumbs up on a job well done, and to future successes

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Thank you,

Alchemical-Night.

09-12-2009	#17
Alchemical Night Watcher Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 258	Re: The Show Must Go On Hi There, I downloaded the clip a little while ago and watched it through. It is a good, very well composed and effective TG work. The transformation was a classic and well handeld. The change of his crotch, the swelling of his rear, breast expansion, hair growth and the final morph were all interesting and effective, though there is some room to improve things. Thinking things over, I thought that perhaps the crotch change might have been more pronounced or used more organic sounds to emphasise the change; though the idea was a brilliant starter and well done. Breast expansion was well handeld, though perhaps other organic sounds could be used beyond the more liquid noises heard. The hair growth was good too and quite well done. The final morph was a little awkward, but such processes can be improved too as well. Also, I did like her commenting on her change, feeling the change in her clothes and kicking her shoes off as she knew they were much too big; a nice, classic theme in much TG fiction which was well done too. The examination was effective and did highlight the idea of the male trying to adapt to his (her) new body. In all, the clips was a good, effective work which does indicate a rich creative potential from Taylor and her associates. Thumbs up on a job well done, and to future successes . Thank you, Alchemical-Night.