New DA artist

Settle down Cattyn, not everybody is out to get everybody. Great work, was worth the look.

[Jumba]

Originally Posted by CattyN

He certainly did say that, but people are saying "i don't like your eyes" when they should be saying "here's how you could do the eyes better."

Plus saying things like "your work scares me" or "I don't like it" isn't helpful tips or anything. I'm just responding to what I read. Some people HAVE given him some good tips... I dunno. Just trying to defend someone who's got an interesting style.

Artist said

Originally Posted by spongebathe83

Any questions, comments, suggestions, tips are welcome.

That sums up nearly everything in most forms of comments.

Personally the eyes don't affect me much. I actually like the style, its odd but because of its odd taste the fact the creature is melting doesn't seem to turn me away from it. It has a oddity clash which cancels eachother out and makes me enjoy this much more.

But I do agree with many who have mentioned, lined paper is a no-no whenever possible.

[Sutibaru]

Saying the art "scares" them isn't a comment, tip, or suggestion. Cattyn was right in a way.

[demitriomni]

Wait... If she's supposed to be emotionless, why is she calling whoever is in that first comic 'sweetie' as opposed to 'master'?

[The Lord of War]

Originally Posted by demitriomni

Wait... If she's supposed to be emotionless, why is she calling whoever is in that first comic 'sweetie' as opposed to 'master'?

Party pooper.

[spongebathe83]

Originally Posted by demitriomni

Wait... If she's supposed to be emotionless, why is she calling whoever is in that first comic 'sweetie' as opposed to 'master'?

I admit there is a lack of continuity. I just drew that under the pretense that this pic happens some time in the future. I probably should have added one of those, "In the not too distant future..." quote boxes in COMIC SANS font.

[demitriomni]

Originally Posted by spongebathe83

I admit there is a lack of continuity. I just drew that under the pretense that this pic happens some time in the future. I probably should have added one of those, "In the not too distant future..." quote boxes in COMIC SANS font.

Well, don't use it as an excuse for those terrible eyes. Sorry for being so blunt, but they are just terrible. If you can't draw them any better at this point, admit it and ask for help or something. And if you're simply unwilling, fine, say so. But jesus christ... At least give a valid reason for those things.

[spongebathe83]

Originally Posted by demitriomni

Well, don't use it as an excuse for those terrible eyes. Sorry for being so blunt, but they are just terrible. If you can't draw them any better at this point, admit it and ask for help or something. And if you're simply unwilling, fine, say so. But jesus christ... At least give a valid reason for those things.

This better? Just remember, I'm very new to this and improvin every day (esp w/ Photoshop).

[demitriomni]

I'm honestly at a loss for words towards that image.

EDIT: Were you being sarcastic, or was that an honest-to-god attempt? I seriously cannot tell.

EDIT2: http://www5c.biglobe.ne.jp/~amazon66...03/cyclops.jpg

[demitriomni]

I apologize for taking that a little far, I'm just overly used to being around artists that make excuses why they shouldn't improve, and his sounded eerily familiar.

[spongebathe83]

Aww damn, and you made me work in another direction and make this one. This one took a bit longer and I'm definately learning how to handle scanned images better.
btw, the funky alien-esque lookin' guy is the "Mad Scientist"; creator of the Silly Putty Golem, Plastina.

now I'm going to try multi-colored SPG's and do what's important...
BREAST EXPANSION. Particularly in sequence type frames.

[Sutibaru]

Looking better spongebathe83. One more thing that you might want to work on. Making the shoulders more feminine. I hate to say it, but her shoulders are very masculine. Shrink them up a bit will you? Unless you want it that way.