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10-28-2012
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Amateur writer
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 547
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Re: New stuff!
Kari it's kinda weird to say but it feels really like you understand how a werewolf works or is supposed to. The way you describe the stuggle and the way you build up your scenes is so vivid that I'd believe you already whent through a change yourself!
Maybe I'm exagerating but who cares, story is good and want more of it, although it seems that the whole werewolf deal was supposed to be a point of conflict with Em's student life but now it's getting a little bit too much focus... I don't know, I'm sure you have a climax built up.
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11-04-2012
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Woof?
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,569
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Re: New stuff!
Chapters 1 & 2 are done now
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11-05-2012
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Process Master
Join Date: Oct 2005
Posts: 709
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Re: New stuff!
Yay, love this story.
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11-06-2012
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Process Fan
Join Date: Mar 2012
Posts: 77
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Re: New stuff!
This story is quite good, and even if the illustrations aren't comicbook worthy, I still love them! I hope this story will continue on for a little longer. I'm glad you are writing!
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11-07-2012
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Woof?
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,569
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Re: New stuff!
I was doodling! =3
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11-08-2012
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CatGirl in Process
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: France
Posts: 152
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Re: New stuff!
Your style is improving more and more Kari. I love your ongoing story.
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11-08-2012
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Woof?
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,569
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Re: New stuff!
Thanks! ^^
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11-13-2012
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Would-be Bard
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Canada
Posts: 492
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Re: New stuff!
Ooh, hot mouse!
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11-13-2012
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OhYeah!
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jersey Shore
Posts: 38,933
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Re: New stuff!
Simply OHYEAH!
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11-17-2012
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Woof?
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,569
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Re: New stuff!
Another quickie, not thrilled with how it turned out, probably won't finish it
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11-17-2012
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ミンナニ ナイショダヨ
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: St. Canard
Posts: 6,091
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Re: New stuff!
Quote:
Also, I'm a biiiiig fan of "sketch-y". It's a big step towards finding "your style".
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11-19-2012
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Woof?
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: Michigan
Posts: 1,569
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Re: New stuff!
A sketch of myself HeeeeHAWWWWW donking out, enjoy!
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