Sex in a Bottle (Part Two up 12/11)

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by vended

I too noticed quite the lack of consistency in DreamTales works lately. :/
In Olympic Trials, for example, in which the characters age and size seem to fluctuate between each panels.

Yard Work tend to do that too.

It's really something Dreamtale should improve. When you're having a character regress, you have to keep track of it. If you portray her as being face to another character's shoulder, don't show her reaching lower then higher with each frames. Same with breast size.
Also, with loose clothing, if the clothes are loose in one pic, having it being tighter then looser look really weird. The lack of continuity is really putting the reader off the story.


Here it was nothing near as noticeable, although Mark looked like a different man as the story continued.

Otherwise, great comic. I don't regret buying it. It was really nicely done. And the twist hint for an interesting second part. ^^
Hopefully we will get to see some different storyline than what has been overdone. Maybe Mark will get a taste of that bottle too. Or those catcalling pricks. :P

Thanks, appreciate the comments on continuity. It's hard to get it perfect, but I'll try to address that as best I can in future comics.

[Kastragos]

Hey Dreamtales,
will there be any AP in the second part, since the daughter already drank the whole bottle in the first.

[vended]

Originally Posted by Dreamtales

Thanks, appreciate the comments on continuity. It's hard to get it perfect, but I'll try to address that as best I can in future comics.

You're welcome. I can't wait for the next part.

Is there any others future AR comic in plan, by the way? What are the ones who sell the most, between this studio, Palcomix and Bojay? Or between AR/AP/ and size changes? If you don't mind the question. :]

[Agemagic]

Originally Posted by Kastragos

Hey Dreamtales,
will there be any AP in the second part, since the daughter already drank the whole bottle in the first.

I am wondering that too. Would be cool if the daughter ends up aging into middle-age accidently as it becomes a true mother-daughter reversal. Would love to see that.

[10th_man_down]

Originally Posted by Agemagic

I am wondering that too. Would be cool if the daughter ends up aging into middle-age accidently as it becomes a true mother-daughter reversal. Would love to see that.

This. And a hot milf on that.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by Agemagic

I am wondering that too. Would be cool if the daughter ends up aging into middle-age accidently as it becomes a true mother-daughter reversal. Would love to see that.

Part Two focuses more on AR. I don't want to give the plot away, but the daughter Jessica has already grown up.

[Dreamtales]

Originally Posted by vended

You're welcome. I can't wait for the next part.

Is there any others future AR comic in plan, by the way? What are the ones who sell the most, between this studio, Palcomix and Bojay? Or between AR/AP/ and size changes? If you don't mind the question. :]

There are definitely more AR comics on the way. The popularity varies, and I'm still trying to figure out why some are more popular than others. Age Vampire did well for example, but some other AR and GTS comics don't earn back the cost of making them.

[smooch]

Very lovely artwork. And I love the design of the bottle. Pure awesome.

[Dreamtales]

40 pages, Color, US$9.99
Age Progression, Age Regression
Artwork by Sedna Studio

The concluding chapter in the classic mother / daughter role reversal story! Sexy Jessica triumphs as her once-domineering Mom dwindles, with more great artwork.

Plot Summary: Jessica’s mom Karen continues her slow, humiliating descent into childhood! Soon Jessica is in the drivers’ seat, giving her shrunken Mom a taste for what it feels like to be bossed around. Can Karen regain her control? And what happens when Jessica sets her sights on Karen’s love interest Mark?

Note: This is the second part of a two part comic.

You can get more info and buy the comics here:

Sex in a Bottle Part One

Sex in a Bottle Part Two

[vended]

Well, it was a very good read.

I'm maybe the only one, but I really longed for a more complex storyline, though. Something different than the "one girl older, one woman younger, and the boyfriend being stolen in the middle".
How much has it been done already, twelve times?

[Otacon29]

Yes, I have to agree with you. I got part 2 and I liked it, but towards the end I felt rushed, as well as the regression scene wasn't as clearly seen. She just says, "I'm tingling" and she regresses, also same age... 6 years old.. all in all good but lacking in some parts.

[10th_man_down]

It was good but not great, for the reasons the others above mentioned.