Black Ice - Story from TSA + Kiskae 2 transformation

[foebits]

Aside from a large number of grammar errors it's pretty good. I especially like how you took time to go through the mental process.

[Daichi Azure]

Originally Posted by joeberan

Pretty good. The text is a little hard to read in some of the panels.

Originally Posted by foebits

Aside from a large number of grammar errors it's pretty good. I especially like how you took time to go through the mental process.

I agree with both of them...from the grammatical errors i take it that English is not your native tounge?

[Scorch]

Originally Posted by Daichi Azure

I agree with both of them...from the grammatical errors i take it that English is not your native tounge?

No, I didn't write it. I just used it. I said so in my first post.